Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子说明原因。

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps my family clean clothes easily, especially in winter when it is too cold to wash by hand.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子，明确表达观点，并用具体细节支持。

例: Yes, I think washing and sweeping machines are important because they save time and effort, especially after a long day at work, making household chores less tiring.

提案: 回答不够自然，表达重复且不连贯。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并说明理由。

例: No, I usually don't read instructions because I prefer to learn how to use machines by trying them myself.

提案: 回答较为完整，但表达有些混乱，语法错误较多。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，使表达更清晰。

例: It depends on the machine. For complex machines, reading instructions is important to avoid mistakes and damage. But for simple machines like washing or sweeping machines, you can usually figure out how to use them yourself.

× I let the washing machine in my family most because in winter it will be very cold, so my mom cannot wash wash the clothes by his own hand in the frozen temperature, so I let the washing machine mist.

✓ I like the washing machine in my family most because in winter it is very cold, so my mom cannot wash the clothes by her own hand in the freezing temperature, so I like the washing machine most.

这里“let”用错了，应该用“like”表示喜欢。还有“wash wash”重复，应去掉一个“wash”。“his own hand”中的“his”指代错误，应该用“her”指代妈妈。最后“mist”应为“most”，表示最喜欢。

× I let the washing machine in my family most because in winter it will be very cold, so my mom cannot wash wash the clothes by his own hand in the frozen temperature, so I let the washing machine mist.

✓ I like the washing machine in my family most because in winter it is very cold, so my mom cannot wash the clothes by her own hand in the freezing temperature, so I like the washing machine most.

“his own hand”中的“his”指代错误，妈妈是女性，应使用“her”。

× I let the washing machine in my family most because in winter it will be very cold, so my mom cannot wash wash the clothes by his own hand in the frozen temperature, so I let the washing machine mist.

✓ I like the washing machine in my family most because in winter it is very cold, so my mom cannot wash the clothes by her own hand in the freezing temperature, so I like the washing machine most.

“frozen temperature”用词不当，应该用“freezing temperature”表示“冰冷的温度”。

× Yes, I think because it can save a lot of money and even and also when you are exhausted from come back from home from work to home and you will not feel so annoyed about doing some chores.

✓ Yes, I think so because it can save a lot of money and also when you are exhausted from coming back home from work, you will not feel so annoyed about doing some chores.

“come back”应改为动名词形式“coming”作为介词“from”的宾语。句子中“from come back from home from work to home”结构混乱，应简化为“coming back home from work”。

× Yes, I think because it can save a lot of money and even and also when you are exhausted from come back from home from work to home and you will not feel so annoyed about doing some chores.

✓ Yes, I think so because it can save a lot of money and also when you are exhausted from coming back home from work, you will not feel so annoyed about doing some chores.

介词“from”后应接动名词形式，故“come back”应改为“coming back”。

× No, never, because I think this is too complex and I think I can explore the usage myself and through the through the process that I have opened it.

✓ No, never, because I think this is too complex and I think I can explore the usage myself through the process after I have opened it.

“through the through the process”重复，应去掉一个“through the”。

× No, never, because I think this is too complex and I think I can explore the usage myself and through the through the process that I have opened it.

✓ No, never, because I think this is too complex and I think I can explore the usage myself through the process after I have opened it.

句子结构混乱，“and through the through the process that I have opened it”不通顺，应调整为“through the process after I have opened it”。

× Maybe it depends. If it is some sophisticated machine, you really need to read the instructions to avoid the mistakes and to just damage the machine.

✓ Maybe it depends. If it is a sophisticated machine, you really need to read the instructions to avoid mistakes and just damaging the machine.

“some sophisticated machine”应改为“a sophisticated machine”，表示泛指单数。去掉“the”使“mistakes”泛指错误。

× Maybe it depends. If it is some sophisticated machine, you really need to read the instructions to avoid the mistakes and to just damage the machine.

✓ Maybe it depends. If it is a sophisticated machine, you really need to read the instructions to avoid mistakes and just damaging the machine.

“to just damage the machine”表达不当，应改为“just damaging the machine”表示避免损坏机器。

× But it's just like the machine washing machine and the sweeping machine. You can just do it yourself.

✓ But it's just like the washing machine and the sweeping machine. You can just do it yourself.

“the machine washing machine”重复且顺序错误，应改为“the washing machine”。