Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“usually seeing”应改为“usually watch”，“help me even knowing news and. Study stuff”表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，并避免句子不完整。

例: My favorite machine at home is the television because my family usually watches movies, TV shows, and dramas while we eat. It creates a lively atmosphere and also helps me stay informed about the news and learn new things.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误，如“sweating machines”应为“sweeping machines”，句子未完成，表达不完整。建议注意词汇准确性，避免句子中断，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help keep our homes clean and tidy. Moreover, they save us a lot of time and effort, so we can spend more time doing other activities.

提案: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误，如“have been user friendly”应为“are user-friendly”，“easy to know their functions”表达不准确。建议使用更地道的表达和正确的语法结构。

例: It depends. Most machines nowadays are user-friendly, so it's easy to understand their functions and how to operate them. Therefore, in many cases, I don't need to read the instructions before using a machine.

提案: 回答内容完整，但表达略显重复且有语法错误，如“contact with the staff”应为“contact the staff”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

例: Yes, I think it's important to keep the instructions. Even if I don't read them before using an easy machine, I keep them in case I have problems later and need to fix it or contact customer service.

× My favorite machine is television because our family usually seeing movies, TV videos and dramas when we are eating and it provide us lively atmosphere and help me even knowing news and. Study stuff.

✓ My favorite machine is the television because our family usually watches movies, TV videos, and dramas when we are eating, and it provides us with a lively atmosphere and helps me even know news and study stuff.

句中 'usually seeing' 应改为 'usually watches'，因为 'usually' 后应使用动词原形或第三人称单数形式，且主语是 'our family'，应使用第三人称单数形式 'watches'。'it provide' 应改为 'it provides'，主语是第三人称单数，动词需加 -s。'help me even knowing' 应改为 'helps me even know'，动词 'help' 后接动词原形。句中缺少定冠词 'the'，应为 'the television'。

× My favorite machine is television because our family usually seeing movies, TV videos and dramas when we are eating and it provide us lively atmosphere and help me even knowing news and. Study stuff.

✓ My favorite machine is the television because our family usually watches movies, TV videos, and dramas when we are eating, and it provides us with a lively atmosphere and helps me even know news and study stuff.

主语 'it' 指代电视机，属于第三人称单数，动词 'provide' 和 'help' 应该加 -s 变为 'provides' 和 'helps'。

× My favorite machine is television because our family usually seeing movies, TV videos and dramas when we are eating and it provide us lively atmosphere and help me even knowing news and. Study stuff.

✓ My favorite machine is the television because our family usually watches movies, TV videos, and dramas when we are eating, and it provides us with a lively atmosphere and helps me even know news and study stuff.

在英语中，表示特定的电视机时，'television' 前应加定冠词 'the'。

× Most of the machines now have been user friendly.

✓ Most of the machines now are user friendly.

句中 'have been' 表示现在完成时，强调动作已完成，但此处描述的是机器的状态，应该用一般现在时 'are'。

× They are easy to know their functions and how we can operate it.

✓ They are easy to understand their functions and how we can operate them.

'easy to know' 不符合习惯表达，应改为 'easy to understand'。'operate it' 中 'it' 指代复数 'machines'，应改为复数代词 'them'。

× So in that cases we don't need to read the instructions before using the machine.

✓ So in those cases, we don't need to read the instructions before using the machine.

'in that cases' 中 'that' 与复数 'cases' 不匹配，应改为 'those'。

× But I will keep it to make sure if I'm in the trouble with it I can see whether I can fix it or contact with the staff.

✓ But I will keep it to make sure if I'm in trouble with it, I can see whether I can fix it or contact the staff.

'in the trouble' 应改为 'in trouble'，'contact with the staff' 中 'contact' 是及物动词，不需要介词 'with'。