Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构不完整且有语法错误，影响了表达的流畅性。建议练习使用完整句子，避免断句，增强表达的连贯性。

例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it cools the room during hot summers and warms it in winter, making us feel comfortable and happy when we stay indoors.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子不连贯。建议加强语法练习，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意时态和词形变化。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines play a very important role in our lives because they free our hands and improve efficiency. Moreover, they help avoid arguments about who should do the housework.

提案: 回答中有多处语法错误和不完整句子，影响理解。建议练习完整句子表达，注意动词形式和句子结构。

例: Yes, of course. I always read the instructions before using a machine because I need to understand how it works. I am afraid of breaking it, which would be a bad choice.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达不清的问题，句子不够连贯。建议多使用连接词，注意句子完整性和语法正确性。

例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions first because this helps you use the machine correctly and avoid unnecessary problems.

× And cool down during the hot summer.

✓ And cool us down during the hot summer.

这里缺少了宾语“us”，动词短语“cool down”需要有宾语来说明冷却谁。

× And it also warmers in the winter.

✓ And it also warms in the winter.

“warmers”是名词形式，句中需要动词“warms”表示加热。

× And it can. Make us more. Happy when stay at home.

✓ And it can make us happier when we stay at home.

句子断句不当，且“more happy”应改为比较级“happier”，缺少主语“we”。

× Yes, I think they are. Playing a very important role in our life.

✓ Yes, I think they play a very important role in our life.

“they are playing”结构错误，应使用一般现在时“they play”表示习惯性动作。

× Since it can free our hands and. Enhance our working efficiency, by the way.

✓ Since they can free our hands and enhance our working efficiency, by the way.

前文提到的是复数“washing machines and sweeping machines”，代词应为复数“they”。

× And it can also avoid quarrel about who will done the worst work, housework.

✓ And they can also avoid quarrels about who will do the worst housework.

代词应为复数“they”，动词“done”应为原形“do”，名词“quarrel”应为复数“quarrels”。

× And because I need to know how to how it is work.

✓ And because I need to know how it works.

“how it is work”结构错误，应为“how it works”，动词用第三人称单数形式。

× And I, I'm afraid to. Broke it down.

✓ And I'm afraid of breaking it down.

“afraid to broke”错误，应使用“afraid of + 动名词”结构。

× And that's very. Not good choice.

✓ And that's not a very good choice.

缺少冠词“a”，形容词顺序错误，应为“not a very good choice”。

× Yes, I think. It is very important to read the instruction first, and then you can use it very. Correctly and avoid many problems that haven't that don't have to be happen.

✓ Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions first, and then you can use it correctly and avoid many problems that don't have to happen.

“instruction”应为复数“instructions”，副词“correctly”位置调整，句子简化使表达更清晰。