Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不完整。建议回答时注意句子完整性，避免语法错误，并且用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

例: My favorite machine at home is my air fryer. I have been using it for about a year since I moved in. I usually put frozen fries, cookies, or chicken wings in it. After 10 to 20 minutes, the food is cooked and crispy.

提案: 回答内容较好，但有语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议注意句子完整性，使用连接词使句子更连贯，并补充具体细节。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in daily life because they help keep our homes clean and organized. Moreover, many modern machines work automatically, which saves a lot of time and effort. This allows people to focus on other important tasks.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但句子结构有些混乱，表达不够自然。建议使用更连贯的句子结构，并用连接词连接观点。

例: Actually, it depends on the device. If the instructions are simple or I am familiar with the device, I usually don't read them and just try to use it. However, if it is my first time using a complex machine, I carefully read the instructions to understand how to operate it properly.

提案: 回答内容明确，但有语法错误和表达不够流畅。建议注意语法正确性，使用连接词使表达更自然，并补充具体例子。

例: Yes, of course. Reading the instructions helps you operate devices properly and avoid mistakes or damage. This is especially important when the device is complex or you are not familiar with how to use it.

× About it Last a year when I moved into my apartment, I usually just throw some food.

✓ About a year ago when I moved into my apartment, I usually just threw some food.

这里需要使用过去时态，因为动作发生在过去。'Last a year' 应改为 'About a year ago'，'throw' 应改为过去式 'threw'。

× And after about 10 to 20 minutes they.

✓ And after about 10 to 20 minutes, they are ready.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词，导致句子结构错误。需要补充谓语使句子完整。

× Yes, I think they are important in our daily life because they help make our house a clean and organized A

✓ Yes, I think they are important in our daily life because they help make our house clean and organized.

'a clean and organized A' 中 'A' 是多余且错误的，且 'clean' 和 'organized' 应作为形容词直接修饰 'house'，不需要冠词。

× Meanwhile, some modern washing and sweeping machines work automatically, which saves a lot of time and effort. This convenience allows people to do other tasks or.

✓ Meanwhile, some modern washing and sweeping machines work automatically, which saves a lot of time and effort. This convenience allows people to do other tasks or rest.

句子末尾不完整，缺少并列部分，导致句子结构不完整。需要补充完整。

× Actually depends if the instructions are simple or unfamiliar with those devices.

✓ Actually, it depends on whether the instructions are simple or if I am unfamiliar with those devices.

句子缺少主语和正确的连接词，导致结构不完整。需要补充主语并使用正确的连接词。

× But if it is the first time for me to use it or it is complex, I'll carefully read instructions and know exactly.

✓ But if it is the first time for me to use it or if it is complex, I'll carefully read the instructions and understand them exactly.

缺少连接词 'if'，'instructions' 前缺少定冠词 'the'，'know exactly' 表达不完整，需改为 'understand them exactly'。

× After reading the instructions, you may know how to operate a devices properly and avoid making some mistakes or do harm to the, Items.

✓ After reading the instructions, you may know how to operate a device properly and avoid making mistakes or doing harm to the items.

'a devices' 中 'a' 与复数 'devices' 不匹配，应改为单数 'a device'。'making some mistakes' 中 'some' 可省略。'do harm to the, Items' 中逗号错误且 'Items' 不应大写，且动词形式应为 'doing'。