Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不自然的地方，例如“makes me accessible to the scene”表达不准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且补充具体细节使回答更丰富。

例: My favourite machine at home is my iPad because it has a large screen and excellent sound quality, which makes watching my favourite movies very enjoyable and immersive.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“in today's city's life”表达重复且不自然。建议使用更准确的表达，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, in today's fast-paced city life, people often don't have enough time to do housework themselves, so washing machines and sweeping machines are very helpful.

提案: 回答中表达不够自然，“seek the approach to use it by myself”不符合英语习惯。建议用更简单直接的表达，并补充原因。

例: No, I usually don't read the instructions because modern machines are user-friendly, and I can figure out how to use them on my own.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“it hears like air conditioners”不清楚。建议用更清晰的句子表达观点，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

例: Yes, I think it's important to read the instructions, especially for devices like air conditioners, so that we can understand how to use all the different modes properly.

× iPad has a large screen and powerful sound unit which really makes me accessible to the scene in my favorite movies and I think it is really helpful.

✓ The iPad has a large screen and a powerful sound unit which really makes me feel immersed in the scenes of my favorite movies, and I think it is really helpful.

这里缺少冠词“the”和“a”，iPad作为特指的设备前应加定冠词“the”，而“powerful sound unit”前应加不定冠词“a”。此外，表达“makes me accessible to the scene”不自然，改为“makes me feel immersed in the scenes”更符合英语表达习惯。

× Yes, in today's city's life, lifestyles are quick, so our family don't have a lot of time to do housework by our own.

✓ Yes, in today's city life, lifestyles are fast, so our family doesn't have a lot of time to do housework on our own.

“city's life”应为“city life”，表示城市生活；“lifestyles are quick”应改为“lifestyles are fast”，形容生活节奏快；“our family don't”主谓不一致，family作为单数应用doesn't；“by our own”应为“on our own”，固定搭配。

× No, because today's machines are easy to use and I think I can seek the approach to use it by myself.

✓ No, because today's machines are easy to use and I think I can figure out how to use it by myself.

“seek the approach to use it”表达不自然，英语中常用“figure out how to use it”表示“自己弄明白怎么用”。

× Yes, sometimes it hears like air conditioners.

✓ Yes, sometimes it sounds like air conditioners.

“it hears like”不正确，应为“it sounds like”，表示“听起来像”。