Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，存在语法错误，如“wash dishes machine”应为“dishwasher”，“save many time”应为“save a lot of time”。建议使用更地道的表达，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

例: My favorite machine at home is the dishwasher. It is very easy to use and helps me save a lot of time on cleaning dishes.

提案: 回答内容较好，但有重复和口语填充词“uh”，影响流畅性。建议避免重复表达，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I think washing machines are very important at home because they save time and help keep the kitchen clean effortlessly.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“read the instruction”应为“reading the instructions”，“may be heard in in using the machine”表达不准确。建议注意语法结构，表达清晰。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions carefully because using a machine incorrectly can be dangerous.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“Read the instructions can”应为“Reading the instructions can”，且表达重复。建议使用正确的语法结构，避免重复。

例: Yes, I believe reading the instructions is important because it helps us use machines properly and avoid injuries.

× My favorite machine in my home is the wash dishes machine.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the dishwasher.

“wash dishes machine”是错误的表达，正确的名词是“dishwasher”，表示洗碗机。这里涉及单复数和固定搭配问题。

× It is very convenient for me to operate it and it can help me save many time.

✓ It is very convenient for me to operate it and it can help me save a lot of time.

“many time”是不正确的用法，time是不可数名词，应该用“a lot of time”或“much time”。

× Washing machine is very important in my home.

✓ The washing machine is very important in my home.

这里缺少冠词“the”，因为特指家里的洗衣机。

× It can not only help me save my time, but also uh, but also help me keep the kitchen clean without much effort.

✓ It can not only help me save my time, but also help me keep the kitchen clean without much effort.

重复使用“but also”是多余的，应去掉一个。

× I think read the instruction is very essential because if you don't read the instruction and then you operate it incorrectly, you may be heard in in using the machine.

✓ I think reading the instructions is very essential because if you don't read the instructions and then operate it incorrectly, you may be hurt when using the machine.

“read the instruction”应改为动名词形式“reading the instructions”，且“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”。“may be heard”应为“may be hurt”，表示可能受伤。

× Read the instructions can not only help us use the machine correctly, but also help us avoid injury in the in using machine.

✓ Reading the instructions can not only help us use the machine correctly, but also help us avoid injury when using the machine.

句首应使用动名词“Reading”而非动词原形“Read”。“in the in using machine”表达错误，应改为“when using the machine”。