Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时句子结构不够完整，且表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，避免断句，并且增加连接词使表达更流畅。

例: My favorite machine at home is the humidifier because the humidity in my city is very high. I often feel uncomfortable as if I am constantly inhaling water. Therefore, the humidifier is like my savior, helping me feel more comfortable indoors.

提案: 回答缺乏连贯性，且表达重复。建议使用连接词连接句子，避免重复表达，并且丰富内容。

例: No, I don't think washing machines and sweeping machines are important in my home because we prefer washing dishes by hand and cleaning the floor with a mop and broom. Since we don't use these machines, they are not essential for us.

提案: 回答较好，但有语法错误和表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, definitely. The buttons on machines are often confusing, so reading the instructions helps me understand all the functions and saves me a lot of time.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的语法结构，避免口语化词汇，并且具体说明不同模式的作用。

例: Yes, I think it's important to read the instructions because some machines have different modes. For example, my washing machine has three modes: a powerful mode for heavy stains, a normal mode for everyday clothes, and a delicate mode for fragile items.

× Because the humidity in the city I live is very high.

✓ The humidity in the city I live in is very high.

句子以连词Because开头，导致句子结构不完整，应将其改为完整句子。

× On the humidifier is my savior.

✓ The humidifier is my savior.

句子中“On the humidifier”用法不当，导致句子结构错误，应直接说“The humidifier is my savior”。

× No, I don't think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because we don't use it in my home.

✓ No, I don't think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because we don't use them in my home.

主语是复数（washing machines and sweeping machines），宾语代词应使用复数形式them，而不是it。

× We wash dishes by hand and use mop and broom to clean the floor.

✓ We wash dishes by hand and use a mop and a broom to clean the floor.

mop和broom是可数名词，单数时前面需要加冠词a。

× I don't use it, so I don't think it's important.

✓ I don't use them, so I don't think they're important.

前文提到的是复数的washing machines and sweeping machines，代词应使用复数形式them和they。

× Reading the instructions allows me to explore all the functions that a machine have and save a lot of time for me.

✓ Reading the instructions allows me to explore all the functions that a machine has and saves a lot of time for me.

主语是单数machine，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式has；前半句主语是Reading，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式saves。

× If we don't look the instructions then we don't know how to use it.

✓ If we don't look at the instructions, then we don't know how to use it.

动词look后面需要加介词at，构成短语look at。

× For example, in my house the washing machines have about 3 modes, a powerful modes and normal modes and whatever.

✓ For example, in my house the washing machine has about 3 modes: a powerful mode, a normal mode, and so on.

washing machine是单数，谓语动词用has；modes前的冠词a应与名词单复数一致；列举时用and so on更自然。