Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，导致意思难以理解。建议简化句子结构，直接表达喜欢的家用机器，并说明原因。

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort when doing laundry.

提案: 表达中存在语法错误和用词不当，句子结构不够连贯。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并准确描述机器的作用。

例: Definitely, I think washing machines are very important because they save time and energy, especially when I have a busy life. They help me relax by doing chores more efficiently.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，部分词汇使用不当。建议简洁明了地说明阅读说明书的重要性，并避免重复和错误用词。

例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because some machines are complex and expensive. This helps me understand how to use them properly and avoid damage.

提案: 表达重复且语法错误较多，句子不够简洁。建议用简洁的句子表达阅读说明书的重要性，并使用正确的语法结构。

例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is very important because it helps me understand how to operate the machine easily and prevents damage.

× There are some more festival machines at my in my home.

✓ There are some more household machines in my home.

句中 'festival machines' 用词不当，应为 'household machines' 表示家用机器。'at my in my home' 结构错误，应为 'in my home'。此处涉及名词复数和介词使用问题。

× There are some more festival machines at my in my home.

✓ There are some more household machines in my home.

介词使用错误，'at my in my home' 应改为 'in my home'，表示在家里。

× I formerly came of some machine like microwave because they can help me save the process of milk and give me some more time to do other things.

✓ I used to have some machines like a microwave because they can help me save the process of heating milk and give me more time to do other things.

'formerly came of' 用法错误，应使用 'used to have' 表示过去常有。'microwave' 前应加冠词 'a'。'save the process of milk' 表达不清，应为 'save the process of heating milk'。

× I formerly came of some machine like microwave because they can help me save the process of milk and give me some more time to do other things.

✓ I used to have some machines like a microwave because they can help me save the process of heating milk and give me more time to do other things.

'some machine' 应为复数 'some machines'，与后文 'they' 一致。

× I formerly came of some machine like microwave because they can help me save the process of milk and give me some more time to do other things.

✓ I used to have some machines like a microwave because they can help me save the process of heating milk and give me more time to do other things.

'some more time' 中 'some more' 用法不当，改为 'more time' 更自然。

× On the other hand, washing machine is a favorite.

✓ On the other hand, the washing machine is my favorite.

'washing machine' 应加定冠词 'the'，且 'favorite' 前应加物主代词 'my'。

× Definitely, I suppose washing machine is crucial because they can help me save some more time and energy to watching clothes and some dishes.

✓ Definitely, I suppose the washing machine is crucial because it can help me save more time and energy washing clothes and some dishes.

'washing machine' 应加定冠词 'the'。'they' 指代单数机器错误，应为 'it'。'to watching' 介词使用错误，应直接用动名词 'washing'。

× Definitely, I suppose washing machine is crucial because they can help me save some more time and energy to watching clothes and some dishes.

✓ Definitely, I suppose the washing machine is crucial because it can help me save more time and energy washing clothes and some dishes.

'to watching' 介词搭配错误，动词后直接用动名词形式。

× Because I have so many busy life, this machine can help me and let me relax.

✓ Because I have such a busy life, this machine can help me and let me relax.

'so many busy life' 错误，'life' 是不可数名词，应使用 'such a busy life'。

× Because I have so many busy life, this machine can help me and let me relax.

✓ Because I have such a busy life, this machine can help me and let me relax.

'have so many busy life' 中 'many' 不适用于不可数名词 'life'。

× Yes, I often read the instructions before using a machine because at the taste society some machine are complex and expensive.

✓ Yes, I often read the instructions before using a machine because in today's society some machines are complex and expensive.

'at the taste society' 应为 'in today's society'，介词和词汇错误。

× Yes, I often read the instructions before using a machine because at the taste society some machine are complex and expensive.

✓ Yes, I often read the instructions before using a machine because in today's society some machines are complex and expensive.

'some machine' 应为复数 'some machines'。

× So reading the instruction before using it is very essential to award understanding and make some damage.

✓ So reading the instructions before using it is very essential to avoid damage and understand better.

'instruction' 应为复数 'instructions'。'award understanding' 用词错误，应为 'avoid damage' 和 'understand better'。

× So reading the instruction before using it is very essential to award understanding and make some damage.

✓ So reading the instructions before using it is very essential to avoid damage and understand better.

'to award understanding' 介词和词汇错误，应为 'to avoid damage'。

× Yes, I think it's very essential for people for me to read the instruction because the reading instruction can help me faster understanding the operator for this machine and make make the easy to use and avoid some damage without reading the instruction.

✓ Yes, I think it's very essential for people, including me, to read the instructions because reading the instructions can help me understand the operation of this machine faster, make it easier to use, and avoid damage.

'instruction' 应为复数 'instructions'。句子结构混乱，需调整以表达清晰。

× Yes, I think it's very essential for people for me to read the instruction because the reading instruction can help me faster understanding the operator for this machine and make make the easy to use and avoid some damage without reading the instruction.

✓ Yes, I think it's very essential for people, including me, to read the instructions because reading the instructions can help me understand the operation of this machine faster, make it easier to use, and avoid damage.

句子结构混乱，重复用词 'make make'，表达不清晰，需重组句子使其通顺。