Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误和表达不够准确的问题，如“freeze the air”不符合实际，应使用“cool the air”。建议注意动词的正确使用，并避免重复表达。

例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner. Since it's summer and very hot, the air conditioner helps cool the air and makes the room comfortable.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“it they improve the life quality”不通顺，且“make my man happy”表达不够正式。建议加强句子结构的准确性和用词的恰当性。

例: Definitely, I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they improve the quality of life. For example, with a washing machine, I can save a lot of time by not washing clothes by hand.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误，如“introductions”应为“instructions”，且句子结构较为重复。建议注意词汇的准确性，并尝试使用多样的句型表达。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it properly and avoid mistakes.

提案: 回答中存在严重的词汇错误，如“either injections”应为“the instructions”，且表达重复且不流畅。建议加强词汇准确性和句子连贯性。

例: Yes, I believe reading the instructions is important because it ensures safe and efficient use of the machine. Also, it helps me discover special features I might not know otherwise.

× As it is a summer and it is hot, we need air conditioner to freeze the air and make us feel more cool and comfortable.

✓ As it is summer and it is hot, we need an air conditioner to cool the air and make us feel cooler and more comfortable.

这里的错误是“a summer”使用了不正确的冠词，summer作为季节名词通常不加冠词；另外，缺少冠词“an”在“air conditioner”前；“freeze the air”用词不当，应使用“cool the air”；“more cool”应改为“cooler”，因为比较级形式需要使用-er结尾。

× Definitely, I think they're both important it they improve the life quality and make my life more comfortable.

✓ Definitely, I think they're both important because they improve the quality of life and make my life more comfortable.

句中“it”应为连词“because”引导原因状语从句；“life quality”表达不自然，应改为“quality of life”。

× Like washing machines for example, I don't need to wash the dishes by myself but only put it into the machine and save a lot of time and make my man happy.

✓ Like washing machines for example, I don't need to wash the dishes by myself but only put them into the machine, saving a lot of time and making my husband happy.

“it”指代复数“dishes”错误，应使用“them”；“make my man happy”表达不自然，改为“make my husband happy”；句子中动作并列，使用现在分词形式更流畅。

× I will miss a lot of extra conditions that I haven't known before.

✓ I will miss a lot of extra instructions that I didn't know before.

“conditions”用词不当，应为“instructions”（说明书内容）；“haven't known”时态不合适，改为过去时“didn't know”。

× I think reading either injections keeps me use the machine safely and efficiently effective.

✓ I think reading the instructions helps me use the machine safely and efficiently.

“either injections”错误，应为“the instructions”；“keeps me use”语法错误，应为“helps me use”；“efficiently effective”重复且用法错误，保留“efficiently”即可。

× So I think it is important and we should all read that and we can also find some special features or other introductions.

✓ So I think it is important and we should all read them, and we can also find some special features or other instructions.

“read that”指代不明确，应为复数“read them”；“introductions”用词错误，应为“instructions”。