Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和用词需更准确，避免语法错误，如“make”应为“makes”。此外，回答可以更自然流畅，避免重复表达。

例: My favorite machine at home is definitely the washing machine because it helps me wash clothes quickly and easily. Previously, I used to wash my trousers by hand, but now the machine saves me a lot of time and effort. It really makes my daily life much more convenient.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如缺少动词“are”，以及重复词汇“they they”。建议注意语法准确性和避免重复。

例: Yes, they are definitely important. They relieve families from heavy housework and also give you more time to relax at home, especially after a hard day's work.

提案: 回答较自然，但部分表达不够正式，如“wing it”。建议使用更正式且准确的表达方式，同时注意句子结构完整。

例: I try to read the instructions, but sometimes the diagrams are confusing. For basic appliances, I usually figure it out myself. However, for expensive or complex machines, I carefully study the manual as if preparing for a final exam.

提案: 回答中比喻不够清晰，表达略显混乱。建议使用更直接和清晰的语言，避免不必要的比喻，确保表达逻辑清楚。

例: Absolutely, I think reading instructions is important. Skipping them might lead to mistakes or problems. Even simple devices can have hidden steps that are easy to miss without reading the manual.

× It really make my daily life much more convenient.

✓ It really makes my daily life much more convenient.

这里主语是第三人称单数（It），谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式makes，而不是make。

× Yeah, they definitely important.

✓ Yeah, they are definitely important.

句子缺少系动词are，主语they后应有谓语动词，表示状态时用be动词。

× and also they they make you have more time to relax in your home, especially after hard work.

✓ and also they make you have more time to relax in your home, especially after hard work.

句子中重复使用了they，属于多余，应删除一个。

× I tried to but half the time the diagrams look like aliens words.

✓ I tried to but half the time the diagrams look like alien words.

aliens是复数名词，作形容词修饰words时应使用单数形式alien。

× For something expensive or complex I will carefully study the menu like it's a final exam.

✓ For something expensive or complex, I will carefully study the manual like it's a final exam.

这里应使用manual（说明书）而非menu（菜单），语义更准确。

× Absolutely skipping instructions like IMF.

✓ Absolutely skipping instructions is like IMF.

句子缺少谓语动词is，导致句子结构不完整。

× You know I'm not saying the finance institution but the film.

✓ You know I'm not saying the financial institution but the film.

finance institution应为financial institution，finance是名词，financial是形容词。

× Yes it is possible, but why risk ending up with mess?

✓ Yes, it is possible, but why risk ending up with a mess?

mess前缺少冠词a，mess是可数名词，需加冠词。