Machine— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
What is your favourite machine in your home?
受験者
No need to think twice in my home. The machine I can't live without is definitely the fridge. I'm always store my favorite beverage and ice cream in there. As a cooking enthusiast, once I've bought ingredients, the refrigerator is totally essential for keeping them fresh.
試験官
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
受験者
In my mind, washing machines and sweeping machines are super important these days. People nowadays tend to spend way more time on work or study and these machines bring convenience and save a heap of time, allowing everyone put their time into something actually matter.
試験官
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
受験者
It usually depends on the situation. For simple machines I'd much rather figure them out by myself, like pressing different buttons to explore their functions. But if it's something complicated or not very common in daily life, I'll just go straight for the instructions.
試験官
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
受験者
When it comes to complex machine, reading the instruction is a must. I reckon. Going through the menu before using them saves tons of times and it also stops you from getting stuck with tricky problems you can't handle.
評価
総合
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答时语法和用词需更准确，避免语法错误，如“I'm always store”应为“I always store”。回答内容应更简洁自然，避免冗余。可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。
例: My favourite machine at home is definitely the refrigerator. I always store my favorite beverages and ice cream in it. As a cooking enthusiast, it is essential for keeping ingredients fresh after I buy them.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答内容较好，但表达中有语法错误，如“allowing everyone put”应为“allowing everyone to put”。建议使用更多连接词使句子更流畅。
例: I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important nowadays. Since people spend more time working or studying, these machines bring convenience and save a lot of time, allowing everyone to focus on things that really matter.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答结构清晰，表达自然。可以适当增加连接词如“however”来增强逻辑性。
例: It usually depends on the situation. For simple machines, I prefer to figure them out myself by pressing different buttons to explore their functions. However, if the machine is complicated or uncommon, I go straight to the instructions.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“complex machine”应为“complex machines”，“reading the instruction”应为“reading the instructions”。建议使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。
例: When it comes to complex machines, reading the instructions is a must, I reckon. Going through the manual before using them saves a lot of time and prevents you from getting stuck with tricky problems you can't handle.
文法
× I'm always store my favorite beverage and ice cream in there.
✓ I'm always storing my favorite beverage and ice cream in there.
这里动词短语应使用动名词形式，表示习惯性动作，故将store改为storing。
× allowing everyone put their time into something actually matter.
✓ allowing everyone to put their time into something that actually matters.
动词allow后应接不定式to put，且something后需加关系代词that引导定语从句，动词matter需加-s与主语something保持一致。
× saves tons of times and it also stops you from getting stuck with tricky problems you can't handle.
✓ saves tons of time and it also stops you from getting stuck with tricky problems you can't handle.
time是不可数名词，不能用复数形式times，应改为time。
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