Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜好和原因，但语言不够自然，句子结构重复且有语法错误。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: My favorite machine at home is the computer because I enjoy playing video games like Pokémon and action games. It also allows me to connect and play with my friends online.

提案: 回答中有较多语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，避免重复，并且注意语法和词汇的准确性。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because they make our lives easier by saving time and effort, allowing us to focus on other activities.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并避免重复。

例: Usually, I don't read the instructions before using a machine because I already know how to use it, or someone has taught me before.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但语言不够流畅且有语法错误。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，清晰表达重要性和原因。

例: Yes, I think reading instructions is very important because it helps us understand how to use new machines safely and avoid mistakes or accidents.

× My favorite machine is computer.

✓ My favorite machine is the computer.

在英语中，单数可数名词前通常需要冠词。这里的computer是单数可数名词，缺少冠词the，应该说the computer。

× so I often use computers to play with some video games such as violence and Pokémon.

✓ so I often use the computer to play some video games such as Violence and Pokémon.

这里的video games是复数，但前面用的是computers复数，语境中应指单一设备，且play后不需要介词with。应改为单数the computer，并去掉with。

× So this is also the activity play with my friends.

✓ So this is also an activity I play with my friends.

原句结构混乱，缺少冠词和连接词，应该加上an表示活动，并补充主语I，使句子完整。

× I think I think those machines is both important because this is to let human to become more convenient

✓ I think those machines are both important because they make life more convenient for humans.

machines是复数，谓语动词应使用are而非is；human应改为复数humans；表达更自然。

× so they they they can make people to reduce the handmade work so people can use those times to do other things.

✓ so they can help people reduce manual work so people can use that time to do other things.

重复使用they，且handmade work用词不当，应为manual work；times应为time，指时间。

× So rather than to do some Washington.

✓ So rather than doing some washing.

rather than后应接动名词doing，而不是不定式to do；Washington是地名，应为washing，指洗衣。

× I would say no, I I don't usually watch the instructions before using the machine

✓ I would say no, I don't usually read the instructions before using the machine.

watch用于观看视频等，阅读说明书应使用read。

× because before I using those machines I already have a idea to use that machine.

✓ because before I use those machines I already have an idea how to use that machine.

before后应使用动词原形use，而不是using；a idea前应使用an，因为idea以元音音素开头。

× Because we are human. So we can cop we are learning to interior and also the teacher can touch, teach, teach us how to use it.

✓ Because we are human, so we can learn by experience and the teacher can teach us how to use it.

cop应为learn，interior用词错误，应为experience；touch重复且不合适，改为teach。

× So I think we we can use it.

✓ So I think we can use it.

重复使用we，应去掉多余的一个。

× I think this is very important to risk the infrastructure.

✓ I think this is very important to read the instructions.

risk the infrastructure完全错误，应为read the instructions，意思是“阅读说明书”。

× This is because when you using the new machines, you have no idea, right?

✓ This is because when you use new machines, you have no idea, right?

when后应使用动词原形use，而不是using。

× So if I watching, if I read the instructions, I know clearly how to use the machine so I I don't make the mistake and also to make it safely.

✓ So if I read the instructions, I know clearly how to use the machine so I don't make mistakes and also use it safely.

watching应改为read；don't make the mistake应为don't make mistakes；to make it safely应改为use it safely。

× This is like without instead of like making dangerous.

✓ This is to avoid making it dangerous.

表达不清，改为更自然的表达，avoid making it dangerous，意思是避免危险。