Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达不够自然，句子结构有些混乱，且存在语法错误。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的表达方式。

例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it helps me stay cool during the hot summer days. I use it every day, and it makes the room much more comfortable.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯的逻辑连接词。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，表达观点时注意逻辑连贯。

例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time and effort when cleaning the house.

提案: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误和重复词汇。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复，并使用更丰富的词汇。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine because they help me understand how to operate it properly and safely.

提案: 回答表达不够流畅，句子结构不完整，且用词不准确。建议使用完整句子，表达清晰具体。

例: Yes, I think reading instructions is essential because they provide useful tips on how to use machines effectively and avoid mistakes.

× That's maybe more that's made me cooler than before.

✓ That's maybe why it has made me cooler than before.

这里的句子结构不完整，缺少连接词"why"，并且时态应使用现在完成时"has made"，表示从过去到现在的影响。建议使用"That's maybe why it has made me cooler than before."来表达更准确。

× I think the washing machines and sweeping machines, they're both vital because our house, if we clean our house, that will spend many times, but if we use it, we can save many times.

✓ I think the washing machines and sweeping machines are both vital because if we clean our house ourselves, it will take a lot of time, but if we use them, we can save a lot of time.

原句中"that will spend many times"表达不清，且"it"指代不明确。应改为"it will take a lot of time"，并且"use it"应改为"use them"，因为前面提到了复数的机器。

× Yeah, I will read the instruction before using a machine because I always didn't know how to use the new machine.

✓ Yeah, I will read the instructions before using a machine because I always didn't know how to use the new machine.

"instruction"应为复数形式"instructions"，因为通常说明书包含多条指示。

× So the instructions are very vital for for me. It can help us better use these machines.

✓ So the instructions are very vital for me. They can help us use these machines better.

"It"指代不明确，应改为复数"They"，因为前文提到的是复数"instructions"。另外，"better use these machines"的词序不正确，应为"use these machines better"。

× I think it's very essential to read instructions because instructions will teach us. Many use these machines tips, so if we use it, we can use it better than before.

✓ I think it's very essential to read instructions because instructions will teach us many tips on how to use these machines, so if we use them, we can use them better than before.

原句中"Many use these machines tips"结构混乱，应改为"many tips on how to use these machines"。此外，"use it"应改为"use them"，因为指代复数的"machines"。