Machine— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
What is your favourite machine in your home?
受験者
Probably the the the fridge. I whenever I reach the fridge I got to accept I got access to a variety of food from yogurt, from meat, or from fruits and vegetables that my mom have bought.
試験官
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
受験者
Umm, obviously, yes, washing machine helps us to help us to wash the dishes and sweeping machine tablets to clean our houses. So both are important because of its utility and uh, we can enjoy our free time without worrying about those days.
試験官
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
受験者
No I would try it out myself to learn like I enjoy learning things on the spot not have and explore things in a different spectacle instead of like trying in trying to read how to use it.
試験官
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
受験者
Yes, it's important to be able to save time, effort and money. You need to read the instructions so that you will not damage the machine yourself and which is the reason why a lot of people have a tendency to read it, but I choose not to do so.
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× I whenever I reach the fridge I got to accept I got access to a variety of food from yogurt, from meat, or from fruits and vegetables that my mom have bought.
✓ I whenever I reach the fridge I have to accept I have access to a variety of food from yogurt, from meat, or from fruits and vegetables that my mom has bought.
The verb 'have' should agree with the singular subject 'my mom', so it should be 'has bought' instead of 'have bought'. Also, 'got to accept' is informal and should be 'have to accept' for correct present tense usage.
× washing machine helps us to help us to wash the dishes and sweeping machine tablets to clean our houses.
✓ washing machine helps us to wash the dishes and sweeping machine helps to clean our houses.
The phrase 'help us to help us to' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'sweeping machine tablets' is unclear and likely a mistake; it should be 'sweeping machine helps'. Pronouns and verbs should be used correctly to avoid redundancy and confusion.
× I enjoy learning things on the spot not have and explore things in a different spectacle instead of like trying in trying to read how to use it.
✓ I enjoy learning things on the spot and exploring things from a different perspective instead of trying to read how to use it.
The phrase 'not have and explore things in a different spectacle' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'from a different perspective'. Also, 'trying in trying to read' is redundant and should be 'trying to read'. Prepositions and phrases should be used correctly for clarity.
× You need to read the instructions so that you will not damage the machine yourself and which is the reason why a lot of people have a tendency to read it, but I choose not to do so.
✓ You need to read the instructions so that you will not damage the machine yourself, which is the reason why a lot of people have a tendency to read it, but I choose not to do so.
The conjunction 'and which' is incorrect here; it should be 'which' to connect the clauses properly. Also, the sentence structure needs a comma to separate the clauses for clarity.
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