Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi về ngữ pháp và nội dung không chính xác (máy giặt không dùng để rửa bát). Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và cung cấp thông tin chính xác, đồng thời sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean my clothes quickly. Moreover, it saves me a lot of time, so I can enjoy my leisure activities. Therefore, I really appreciate having it.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'shooting machines' thay vì 'sweeping machines'). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng liên từ để làm rõ ý và tránh lỗi từ vựng.

例: I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they make household chores easier. However, people should not rely on them too much, as doing some tasks manually can keep us active and healthy.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không rõ nghĩa, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và giải thích rõ ràng hơn về thói quen của mình.

例: I usually don't read the instructions because the buttons are labeled clearly, so it's easy to understand how to use the machine. However, I do read the manual when I use a new or complicated device.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng liên từ để làm rõ ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because it helps prevent mistakes and shows that you are careful. From now on, I will try to read the instructions more often.

× Not only it helps me to get rid of the dishes, but also give me more time to do my own leisure activities.

✓ Not only does it help me to get rid of the dishes, but it also gives me more time to do my own leisure activities.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement errors and incorrect sentence structure. 'Not only it helps' should be 'Not only does it help' to form a correct question-like structure. Also, 'give me' should be 'gives me' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Don't realize you don't rely on it too much, because they may get lazy after that even.

✓ Don't realize that you shouldn't rely on it too much, because you may get lazy after that even.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used to refer to 'you'. The sentence should consistently use 'you' to refer to the person. Also, the phrase 'Don't realize' is awkward and should be 'Don't think' or 'Don't believe'.

× And after all, the washing machines and shooting machines are very useful.

✓ And after all, the washing machines and sweeping machines are very useful.

The word 'shooting machines' is likely a mistake for 'sweeping machines'. Also, the plural form is correct here as it refers to multiple machines.

× I rarely read the instructions because it's kind of easy to understand what's the buttons do because they already have their names writing on it.

✓ I rarely read the instructions because it's kind of easy to understand what the buttons do since they already have their names written on them.

The phrase 'what's the buttons do' is incorrect; it should be 'what the buttons do'. Also, 'writing on it' should be 'written on them' to correctly refer to the plural 'buttons'.

× I only read the instructions for the for the call call linkings in.

✓ I only read the instructions for the call linkings.

The sentence has repeated words 'for the for the' and 'call call' which is incorrect. It should be simplified to 'for the call linkings'.

× That's a good questions, 100% true because read the instructions not only have you get away from mistakes, but to show that you are a very careful person.

✓ That's a good question, 100% true because reading the instructions not only helps you avoid mistakes, but also shows that you are a very careful person.

'Questions' should be singular 'question' to agree with 'a good'. The phrase 'read the instructions not only have you get away from mistakes' is incorrect; it should be 'reading the instructions not only helps you avoid mistakes'.

× Maybe I should try to read the instructions after this.

✓ Maybe I should try to read the instructions after this.

This sentence is correct and does not contain grammar errors based on the provided list.