Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，且部分句子冗长且不连贯。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达。

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves a lot of time and effort. Since we have a large family, it helps us clean many clothes quickly. Without it, doing laundry by hand would be tiring and time-consuming.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且结尾部分不完整。建议使用更准确的连接词，确保句子完整且逻辑清晰。

例: Yes, I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time and effort. Without them, we would spend too much time on housework and have less time for other important tasks.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和未完成的句子，影响表达的清晰度。建议避免重复，确保句子完整，并使用恰当的词汇表达观点。

例: It depends on the machine. If I have used a similar one before, I usually don't read the instructions because it feels unnecessary. However, if the machine is new or complicated, I always read the instructions carefully to use it correctly.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误和句子不完整的问题，影响表达效果。建议使用正确的词汇，确保句子完整，并举具体例子支持观点。

例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions carefully. They provide essential information on how to use a product safely and correctly, which helps prevent mistakes and accidents, such as when assembling furniture or using electrical appliances.

× it helps us save a lot of time and effort by quickly cleaning a big pair of clothes.

✓ it helps us save a lot of time and effort by quickly cleaning a large amount of clothes.

“a big pair of clothes”中“pair”用于成对物品，如鞋子，衣服通常用复数形式，且“big”不适合描述数量，应该用“a large amount of clothes”表示大量衣服。

× Without it, doing laundry by hand would be a very tiring and time consuming makes these plans indispensable.

✓ Without it, doing laundry by hand would be very tiring and time-consuming, which makes these machines indispensable.

原句结构混乱，“makes these plans indispensable”与前半句连接不当，缺少主语和连词，需调整句子结构使其通顺。

× Without this machine, we will spend too much time on housework and have less time on our work that we should focus on so.

✓ Without these machines, we would spend too much time on housework and have less time to focus on our work.

“this machine”与前文提到的复数“washing machines and sweeping machines”不一致，应使用复数“these machines”。“have less time on our work that we should focus on so”表达不清，需简化为“have less time to focus on our work”。

× However, however, if it is a new or complex machine, I will read it to make sure key to.

✓ However, if it is a new or complex machine, I will read it to make sure I understand the key points.

重复使用“However”冗余，且“make sure key to”不完整，缺少宾语，需补充完整表达。

× I believe it is very important to raise the instructions carefully.

✓ I believe it is very important to read the instructions carefully.

“raise the instructions”用词错误，应为“read the instructions”，表示“阅读说明书”。

× Instructions provide essential information on how to use a product or complete a task correctly, which helps present or prevent mistakes and accidents, for example, when assembling furniture or using electric.

✓ Instructions provide essential information on how to use a product or complete a task correctly, which helps prevent mistakes and accidents, for example, when assembling furniture or using electrical appliances.

“helps present or prevent mistakes”中“present”用错，应为“prevent”。“using electric”不完整，应为“using electrical appliances”。句子需调整使其完整通顺。