Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I just can't put my clothes in a washing machine”表达不清晰，且有重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time. I don't have to wash clothes by hand, which is very convenient for my busy schedule.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“need to some really advanced equipment”不正确，且表达不够流畅。建议注意语法准确性，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because in today's fast-paced life, people often don't have enough time to do household chores manually, so these machines help them save time and effort.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“I don't I don't think I'm a tech savvy person”。建议避免重复，简化表达，并注意语法正确。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine because I'm not very tech-savvy, and reading helps me understand how to use it properly.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构复杂且有语法错误，如“save my time from reading some unnecessary research”。建议使用更简单明了的句子，避免复杂表达。

例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is very important because it helps me use the machine correctly and saves time by avoiding mistakes.

× I'm quite fond of washing machine because it can save my time from a busy life.

✓ I'm quite fond of the washing machine because it can save me time in a busy life.

这里“washing machine”应该加定冠词“the”，表示特指家里的洗衣机。同时“save my time from a busy life”表达不自然，改为“save me time in a busy life”更符合英语习惯。

× I just can't put my clothes in a washing machine.

✓ I just can put my clothes in a washing machine.

原句中“can't”与上下文意思不符，应该是“can”，表示能够把衣服放进洗衣机。

× most of people don't have enough time to do these chores by themselves.

✓ most people don't have enough time to do these chores by themselves.

“most of people”是不正确的表达，正确用法是“most people”，省略“of”。

× So they need to some really advanced equipment for them to help them couple with these chores.

✓ So they need some really advanced equipment to help them cope with these chores.

“need to some”是不正确的搭配，应为“need some”。“couple with”应为“cope with”，表示应对。

× I need to read some really important instructions before I use some unfamiliar machine because I don't I don't think I'm a tech savvy person, so I need to read some instructions before I use it.

✓ I need to read some really important instructions before I use an unfamiliar machine because I don't think I'm a tech-savvy person, so I need to read some instructions before I use it.

“some unfamiliar machine”应改为“an unfamiliar machine”，因为“machine”是单数可数名词，前面用不定冠词。

× I think it can be quite indispensable for me to read the instructions before I use a machine because it can be seen as the most effective way for me to save my time from reading some unnecessary research.

✓ I think it is quite indispensable for me to read the instructions before I use a machine because it can be seen as the most effective way for me to save time by avoiding unnecessary mistakes.

“save my time from reading some unnecessary research”表达不清且不自然，改为“save time by avoiding unnecessary mistakes”更符合语境。

× And also I need read them to know more about this.

✓ And also I need to read them to know more about it.

“need read”缺少不定式“to”，应为“need to read”。“know more about this”中“this”指代不明，改为“it”更合适。