Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, be more specific about the machine and explain why it is your favorite in a clear way. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

例: My favourite machine at home is the sewing machine because it helps me create new designs and express my creativity. It is very useful for my work as a designer and inspires me to try new ideas.

提案: Your answer has some vocabulary mistakes and grammatical errors. Use correct terms like 'washing machine' and 'sweeping machine'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why these machines are important.

例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they make our daily chores easier and save a lot of time. Moreover, they help us keep our homes clean and comfortable.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, use correct vocabulary and sentence structure to express your opinion clearly.

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely. Otherwise, there is a high risk of damaging the machine during the first use.

提案: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use proper sentence structure and vocabulary to explain why reading instructions is important. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is important because they provide detailed information about the device. This helps us use the device effectively and avoid any problems.

× As a designer, I would say swing missing is the most favorite thing that belong in my home because that give me the identity who I am to create a new item to pursue new things that help me a lot and I just.

✓ As a designer, I would say the swing machine is the most favorite thing that belongs in my home because it gives me the identity of who I am to create new items and pursue new things that help me a lot.

The sentence has singular and plural issues: 'swing missing' should be 'swing machine' (singular noun), 'belong' should be 'belongs' to agree with singular subject, and 'give' should be 'gives' for subject-verb agreement. Also, 'item' should be plural 'items' to match 'new things'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, watching missing and being missing are important because usually it make our life more easy and even save lots of time.

✓ Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are important because usually they make our life easier and even save lots of time.

The original sentence has singular/plural errors: 'watching missing' and 'being missing' are incorrect; they should be 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines' (plural nouns). Also, 'it make' should be 'they make' to agree with plural subject. 'More easy' should be 'easier' (comparative adjective). These corrections improve grammatical correctness and meaning.

× It's also make us feel more comfortable while doing things.

✓ It also makes us feel more comfortable while doing things.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' (third person singular) instead of 'make'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.

× Yes, I read the instruction before using a machine because I think instructions are a more important to be read before using any kind of machine.

✓ Yes, I read the instructions before using a machine because I think instructions are more important to read before using any kind of machine.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' to match the context. Also, 'a more important' is incorrect; 'more important' without 'a' is correct. These are singular/plural and article usage issues.

× Because without reading instruction there is high chance of damaging the missing in our first use only.

✓ Because without reading instructions, there is a high chance of damaging the machine on our first use.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. Also, 'there is high chance' needs the article 'a' before 'high chance'. 'Missing' is incorrect; it should be 'machine'. This is a 'there be' issue and singular/plural problem.

× So it is so important to read before.

✓ So it is very important to read before use.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. Adding 'use' clarifies the meaning. 'So' repeated is redundant; 'very' is better. This is a sentence structure and singular/plural issue.

× Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions before using any devices because the instructions of the detail about the devices and it allow us to use the device very usefully.

✓ Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions before using any device because the instructions provide details about the device and allow us to use it very effectively.

'Devices' should be singular 'device' to match 'any'. 'Instructions of the detail' is incorrect; it should be 'instructions provide details'. 'It allow' should be 'they allow' or 'instructions allow'. 'Usefully' is an adverb but 'effectively' fits better here. These are singular/plural and sentence structure issues.