Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复表达，且注意语法错误，如“sweeping machine”应为“vacuum cleaner”，并且句子应更简洁自然。可以用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: My favourite machine at home varies depending on my needs. For example, I use the coffee machine to boost my energy, my laptop for work or study, and the vacuum cleaner to clean the house when I'm feeling lazy. Therefore, it's difficult to choose just one.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“sweeping machine”应为“vacuum cleaner”，且句子结构需更清晰。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important. They save a lot of time and effort compared to doing laundry or cleaning by hand. For instance, a washing machine quickly cleans clothes, while a vacuum cleaner efficiently removes dust from floors, making daily life easier.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“you want my mistake”应为“avoid mistakes”，且“instruction”应为复数形式。建议简化句子并使用连接词。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they help me understand how to operate it safely and correctly. This also saves time by preventing mistakes and guesswork.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“most important things”应为“most important thing”，且“make mistake”应为“make mistakes”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is very important before using any machine. It helps you use the device correctly and safely, prevents mistakes, and avoids damaging the machine.

× Sometimes it's my sweeping machine because I was so lazy to do the housework.

✓ Sometimes it's my sweeping machine because I am so lazy to do the housework.

这里使用过去时态“was”不符合上下文，因为学生描述的是当前的习惯或状态，应该使用现在时态“am”。

× I can't not live without them.

✓ I can't live without them.

“can't not”是双重否定，表达含糊且不符合英语习惯，应去掉其中一个否定词，改为“I can't live without them.”表示“我离不开它们”。

× The washing machine can help you to save time and effort compared to you doing your laundry by hand and sweeping machine like Robert Vacuum can help you to keep your clothes clean with the minimum effort.

✓ The washing machine can help you save time and effort compared to doing your laundry by hand, and a sweeping machine like Robert Vacuum can help you keep your floors clean with minimum effort.

“compared to you doing”结构不自然，改为“compared to doing”；“sweeping machine like Robert Vacuum”前缺少冠词“a”；“keep your clothes clean”应为“keep your floors clean”，因为扫地机是清洁地板，不是衣服。

× They can just make your daily life much more easier.

✓ They can just make your daily life much easier.

“more easier”是错误的比较级表达，形容词“easy”的比较级是“easier”，不需要加“more”。

× Of course I always read the instruction before I use the machine because it can help you to understand how to use the machine correctly and safely.

✓ Of course I always read the instructions before I use the machine because they can help you understand how to use the machine correctly and safely.

“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”，因为通常说明书包含多条指示。

× And also you can save time because you want my mistake or you don't need time to guess.

✓ And also you can save time because you won't make mistakes or you don't need time to guess.

“you want my mistake”语法错误，应为“you won't make mistakes”，表达“你不会犯错”。

× So instruction are there for a reason.

✓ So instructions are there for a reason.

“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”，主语和谓语需保持一致。

× Of course, I think it's the most important things before you use the machine because it can really help you to understand how to use it correctly and safely.

✓ Of course, I think it's the most important thing before you use the machine because it can really help you understand how to use it correctly and safely.

“the most important things”应为单数“the most important thing”，因为指的是一件最重要的事。

× Plus it can help you to save time because you won't make mistake.

✓ Plus it can help you save time because you won't make mistakes.

“make mistake”应为复数“make mistakes”，表示犯错误的行为。

× Also it can help you not to damage your machine.

✓ Also it can help you avoid damaging your machine.

“help you not to damage”表达不自然，改为“help you avoid damaging”更符合英语习惯。