Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, say: "My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time. Additionally, it washes and dries clothes efficiently."

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time. Moreover, it washes and dries clothes efficiently, which makes household chores easier.

提案: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Focus on directly answering the question with clear reasons and use linking words to connect ideas. For example: "Yes, I think both washing and sweeping machines are important because they save time and provide convenience in daily chores."

例: Yes, I think both washing and sweeping machines are important because they save time and provide convenience in daily chores. For instance, they help keep the house clean and clothes fresh without much effort.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by reducing repetition and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to explain why you read instructions. For example: "Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely and correctly."

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely and correctly, which prevents accidents.

提案: Your answer needs to be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct statement, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. For example: "Yes, I believe reading instructions is very important because it ensures safety and helps set the machine correctly for different types of clothes."

例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is very important because it ensures safety and helps set the machine correctly for different types of clothes, such as choosing the right washing cycle and timer.

× In my home different type of machine but my favorite machine is a washing machine because it is help to me save that time and that was the clothes so and dry also.

✓ In my home, there are different types of machines but my favorite machine is a washing machine because it helps me save time and wash and dry clothes as well.

The phrase 'different type of machine' should be pluralized to 'different types of machines' to agree with the plural subject. Also, 'it is help to me save that time' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps me save time' to use the correct verb form and structure.

× In my home different type of machine but my favorite machine is a washing machine because it is help to me save that time and that was the clothes so and dry also.

✓ In my home, there are different types of machines but my favorite machine is a washing machine because it helps me save time and wash and dry clothes as well.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'washing machine'.

× In my home different type of machine but my favorite machine is a washing machine because it is help to me save that time and that was the clothes so and dry also.

✓ In my home, there are different types of machines but my favorite machine is a washing machine because it helps me save time and wash and dry clothes as well.

The sentence lacks the correct 'there are' construction to indicate existence of multiple machines in the home.

× I believe I, I believe that the speaking machine and the washing machine is very important in every home because of that that that was that is because this is a lot of time and giving you more convenience.

✓ I believe that the sweeping machine and the washing machine are very important in every home because they save a lot of time and provide more convenience.

The subject 'the sweeping machine and the washing machine' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'speaking machine' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'sweeping machine'.

× I believe I, I believe that the speaking machine and the washing machine is very important in every home because of that that that was that is because this is a lot of time and giving you more convenience.

✓ I believe that the sweeping machine and the washing machine are very important in every home because they save a lot of time and provide more convenience.

The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'the sweeping machine and the washing machine'.

× I believe I, I believe that the speaking machine and the washing machine is very important in every home because of that that that was that is because this is a lot of time and giving you more convenience.

✓ I believe that the sweeping machine and the washing machine are very important in every home because they save a lot of time and provide more convenience.

The pronouns and filler words like 'that that that was that is because this is' are confusing and incorrect. They should be removed or replaced with clear pronouns like 'they' to refer to the machines.

× I always read the instruction before the using because of it is I I understand how how I can operate the machine and operate the machine and safety instruction.

✓ I always read the instructions before using the machine because it helps me understand how to operate the machine and follow safety instructions.

'The instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because usually instructions are multiple. Also, 'before the using' is incorrect; it should be 'before using'. The phrase 'operate the machine and operate the machine and safety instruction' is repetitive and unclear; it should be simplified.

× I always read the instruction before the using because of it is I I understand how how I can operate the machine and operate the machine and safety instruction.

✓ I always read the instructions before using the machine because it helps me understand how to operate the machine and follow safety instructions.

The preposition 'before the using' is incorrect; 'before using' is the correct form without 'the'.

× I always read the instruction before the using because of it is I I understand how how I can operate the machine and operate the machine and safety instruction.

✓ I always read the instructions before using the machine because it helps me understand how to operate the machine and follow safety instructions.

The phrase 'because of it is I I understand' is incorrect and redundant. It should be 'because it helps me understand' to clearly express the reason.

× Since I believe it is instruction is reading a very important for everyone because of it helps about the safety and we are using the different types of clothes so we we can set a timer or close types so which is I am washing in the machine.

✓ I believe reading instructions is very important for everyone because it helps with safety and when we use different types of clothes, we can set a timer or select the correct settings for washing in the machine.

'Instruction is reading' is incorrect; it should be 'reading instructions'. Also, 'close types' is likely a mishearing of 'clothes types' or 'cloth types'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Since I believe it is instruction is reading a very important for everyone because of it helps about the safety and we are using the different types of clothes so we we can set a timer or close types so which is I am washing in the machine.

✓ I believe reading instructions is very important for everyone because it helps with safety and when we use different types of clothes, we can set a timer or select the correct settings for washing in the machine.

The preposition 'helps about the safety' is incorrect; it should be 'helps with safety'.