Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，且有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更地道的表达方式。

例: My favourite machine at home is my iPad because it is very convenient for studying and essential for my daily learning.

提案: 回答内容有逻辑，但语法和用词不准确，且句子结构不够流畅。建议注意主谓一致，使用正确的时态和介词，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: In today's fast-paced world, time management is crucial. Therefore, washing machines and sweeping machines are essential because they help us save time and live more efficiently.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用更准确的词汇表达原因，并避免模糊的描述。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they explain how to operate it safely and correctly.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，且例子不够合理。建议避免重复，使用更合适的例子，并注意语法准确性。

例: Yes, it's important to read the instructions. For example, if you don't follow the safety guidelines of an appliance, it could malfunction and cause accidents.

× I prefer using iPad for electric appliance owing to that iPad is convenient for students to study and it's essential for me to to.

✓ I prefer using the iPad as an electric appliance because the iPad is convenient for students to study and it's essential for me too.

动词后面使用动名词形式时，表达偏好时用 'prefer using' 是正确的，但句子中 'owing to that' 用法不当，应改为 'because'。此外，'to to' 是重复错误，应删除多余的 'to'。另外，'iPad' 前应加定冠词 'the'，因为特指某个设备。

× Therefore, washing machine and sweeping machines is essential for us to saving time and provide high efficiency life.

✓ Therefore, washing machines and sweeping machines are essential for us to save time and provide a high-efficiency life.

主语是复数 'washing machines and sweeping machines'，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are'，而不是单数 'is'。此外，'to saving' 应改为动词原形 'to save'，'high efficiency life' 应加连字符变为形容词短语 'high-efficiency life'。

× Therefore, washing machine and sweeping machines is essential for us to saving time and provide high efficiency life.

✓ Therefore, washing machines and sweeping machines are essential for us to save time and provide a high-efficiency life.

动词不定式后应接动词原形，不能用动名词形式，'to saving' 应改为 'to save'。

× I prefer using iPad for electric appliance owing to that iPad is convenient for students to study and it's essential for me to to.

✓ I prefer using the iPad as an electric appliance because the iPad is convenient for students to study and it's essential for me too.

'iPad' 是特指的设备，前面应加定冠词 'the'。同样，'electric appliance' 前应加不定冠词 'an'，因为是泛指一类电器。

× For example, if you don't obey to the the instruction of the refrigerator refrigerator, the refrigerator will blow up and result in the injury.

✓ For example, if you don't obey the instructions of the refrigerator, the refrigerator will blow up and result in injury.

动词 'obey' 后不需要介词 'to'，应直接接宾语。'the the' 是重复错误，应删除多余的 'the'。'instruction' 应用复数形式 'instructions'，因为通常有多条说明。'result in the injury' 中 'the' 不需要，改为 'result in injury'。