Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of listing benefits separately, you can combine them logically.

例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me wash clothes effectively and saves a lot of time, making my daily routine more convenient.

提案: Good answer but try to use plural verbs to match plural subjects and add linking words to enhance coherence. Also, provide a bit more specific detail to enrich your response.

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are crucial for every household because they make chores much easier and save a significant amount of time, allowing people to focus on other activities.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Avoid using incorrect or unclear words like 'electronic Gazette'. Try to complete your sentences and explain clearly why you read instructions.

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I am not very familiar with electronics, so reading the manual helps me avoid mistakes and use the machine correctly.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to combine your ideas into one coherent sentence using linking words and avoid sentence fragments.

例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using a machine because it helps us avoid mistakes and ensures that we use the machine properly.

× Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are crucial for every household because it makes work much easier and saves lots of time.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are crucial for every household because they make work much easier and save lots of time.

The subject 'washing machines and sweeping machines' is plural, so the verbs should also be plural ('make' and 'save') instead of singular ('makes' and 'saves'). This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I am not good with any electronic Gazette. So to prevent any errors or.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I am not good with any electronic gadget, so I want to prevent any errors.

The sentence is incomplete and contains a wrong word 'Gazette' instead of 'gadget'. Also, the sentence fragment 'So to prevent any errors or.' is incomplete. Correcting the word and combining the sentences properly improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using it because it allows us to avoid any mistakes and errors. And. Use the machine in a proper way.

✓ Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using it because it allows us to avoid any mistakes and errors and use the machine in a proper way.

The sentence is fragmented with 'And.' starting a new sentence improperly. Combining the fragments into one complete sentence improves sentence structure and flow.