Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如句子不完整和多余的词汇。建议注意句子完整性，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves a lot of time and effort. It helps people avoid spending too much attention on boring chores like laundry.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误（如'swiping'应为'sweeping'）和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用准确词汇，避免语法错误，并且使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I believe both washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save time and effort, allowing people to focus on more important tasks instead of cleaning.

提案: 回答中句子断裂较多，表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子结构，避免断句过短，并注意语法一致性。

例: Not really. To be honest, I rarely read the instructions before using a machine. I prefer to explore its functions myself or watch videos because the instructions are often too complicated.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如'takes'应为'take'，句子结构不够清晰。建议注意语法和句子结构，使表达更自然。

例: No, I don't think it's necessary to read the instructions before using a machine because sometimes they take too much time to read and are not always essential.

× Because it. Really save people's time and effort they spend.

✓ Because it really saves people's time and effort they spend.

这里动词'save'应使用第三人称单数形式'saves'，因为主语是单数的'it'。另外，句子中断句不完整，应合并为一句完整句子。

× And it also can help people to reduce the their attention on such boring things.

✓ And it can also help people reduce their attention on such boring things.

'the their'是重复使用定冠词，应去掉'the'。此外，'help people to reduce'中'help'后面通常直接接动词原形，去掉'to'更自然。

× I think the washing machines and swiping machines have the same meaning that help people to save the time and the effort.

✓ I think the washing machines and sweeping machines have the same function, helping people save time and effort.

'swiping machines'应为'sweeping machines'，是拼写错误。'have the same meaning'不合适，机器没有'meaning'，应为'have the same function'。此外，'the time and the effort'中定冠词不必要，改为'time and effort'更自然。

× They can pay more attention to important things instead of washing or sweating.

✓ They can pay more attention to important things instead of washing or sweeping.

'sweating'是出汗的意思，语境应为'扫地'，应改为'sweeping'。

× Not really. To be frank.

✓ Not really, to be frank.

'Not really.'和'To be frank.'都是不完整句子，应合并为一句完整句子，使用逗号连接。

× I always want to discover the function of the machine by myself instead of reading that, or I will, learn how to use the machine by videos because the instructions is too complex.

✓ I always want to discover the function of the machine by myself instead of reading it, or I will learn how to use the machine by videos because the instructions are too complex.

'reading that'应为'reading it'，指代说明书。'the instructions is'主谓不一致，'instructions'为复数，应使用'are'。句中逗号位置错误，应去掉逗号。

× No, I don't. I think it's not necessary to read instructions before you using the machine because sometimes the instructions may takes people too much time to read and it's not so vital that you have to read it.

✓ No, I don't. I think it's not necessary to read instructions before you use the machine because sometimes the instructions may take people too much time to read and it's not so vital that you have to read it.

'before you using'应为'before you use'，动词应为原形。'instructions may takes'主谓不一致，'instructions'为复数，动词应为'take'。