Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“air condition”应为“air conditioner”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和更流畅的句子结构。

例: My favourite machine at home is definitely the air conditioner because it helps me stay cool during the hot summer. For example, last summer the temperature reached 40 degrees Celsius, and I couldn't have survived without it.

提案: 回答中存在表达不清和语法错误，如“weak hole close”不明确。建议使用更准确的表达，并补充具体细节。

例: Yes, I think both washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because they save a lot of time and effort. For example, the washing machine can clean clothes thoroughly and quickly, which is very convenient.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“use instruction”应为“read the instructions”，句子结构不完整。建议注意时态和句子完整性。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine. For instance, when I bought a new blender, I read the manual first to avoid any problems.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“to reading”应为“to read”，句子表达不够流畅。建议改进语法并使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions. For example, my friend didn't read the manual when using a new coffee machine and ended up spilling water everywhere.

× My favorite machine at home is definitely the air condition because it can make me feel cool during the hot summer.

✓ My favorite machine at home is definitely the air conditioner because it can make me feel cool during the hot summer.

“air condition”应为“air conditioner”，因为“air conditioner”是指空调设备的正确单数形式。

× For instance, the last summer temperature hit 40° and I literally can't survive without it.

✓ For instance, last summer the temperature hit 40° and I literally couldn't survive without it.

“last summer”表示过去时间，后面的动词应使用过去时态，“can't”应改为“couldn't”。

× Yes, I think both of them are important in my daily life because they can save a huge amount of time and effort. For instance, the washing machine can deal with a weak hole close.

✓ Yes, I think both of them are important in my daily life because they can save a huge amount of time and effort. For instance, the washing machine can deal with a weak hole close.

此句中“a weak hole close”不符合语法和表达习惯，可能是表达错误，但不属于给定的语法问题类型，故不做修改。

× Yes, I always use instruction before I use using a machine.

✓ Yes, I always use instructions before I use a machine.

“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”，因为通常指多条使用说明。

× For instance, I buy a new blender. I first reading the instructions, I think it can avoid some troubles.

✓ For instance, when I buy a new blender, I first read the instructions. I think it can help avoid some troubles.

句子结构混乱，“I first reading”应改为“I first read”，并且需要连接词使句子通顺。

× Yes, I think it's very important to reading the instructions.

✓ Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions.

“to reading”应改为不定式“to read”，因为“to”后面接动词原形。

× For instance, my friend using a new coffee machine, she didn't read the instructions and she slipped the water everywhere.

✓ For instance, my friend was using a new coffee machine, she didn't read the instructions and she spilled water everywhere.

“my friend using”应改为“my friend was using”，表示过去进行时；“slipped the water”应改为“spilled water”，因为“spill”表示洒出液体。