Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly state your favorite machine and explain why you like it using clear and correct sentences. Avoid unclear phrases like 'made green the dish'.

例: My favorite machine at home is the dishwasher because it saves me a lot of time and effort. It cleans the dishes thoroughly after meals, making kitchen chores easier and faster.

提案: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Focus on directly answering the question with clear reasons and examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save time and effort in daily life. However, some families may not afford them and prefer to clean manually to save money.

提案: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to clearly explain why reading instructions is important, using correct grammar and linking words.

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it properly and avoid mistakes, making the process easier.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear reason why reading instructions is important, using correct sentence structure and linking words.

例: Yes, reading instructions is important because it provides specific information about the machine and helps us avoid mistakes while using it.

× The first thing comes to my mind is my dishing washer is very convenient and easy to use.

✓ The first thing that comes to my mind is my dishwasher, which is very convenient and easy to use.

The phrase 'dishing washer' is incorrect; the correct term is 'dishwasher'. Also, 'thing comes' should be 'thing that comes' to be grammatically correct. The sentence also needs a relative clause to connect 'dishwasher' and the description.

× That machine is have made green the dish after meal.

✓ That machine helps clean the dishes after meals.

The original sentence uses incorrect verb forms 'is have made green'. The intended meaning is that the machine cleans dishes. 'Helps clean' is a correct present tense expression. Also, 'dish' should be plural 'dishes' and 'after meal' should be 'after meals'.

× I think they are very convenient in people daily life, they have a safe time, but it's a financial condition is not too good.

✓ I think they are very convenient in people's daily lives; they save time, but if the financial condition is not too good,

The phrase 'people daily life' should be 'people's daily lives' to show possession and plural. 'Have a safe time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'save time'. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× The families can save the money and clean the dishes by themselves and not.

✓ families can save money and clean the dishes by themselves or not.

The phrase 'and not' is unclear and ungrammatical. It should be 'or not' to indicate an alternative. Also, 'the money' should be 'money' as a general concept.

× Yes, of course reading injection is very crucial before using one items because help us understand more the way and the function of this machine is also have that use this machine more easier.

✓ Yes, of course, reading instructions is very crucial before using an item because it helps us understand better the way and function of this machine, which also makes using this machine easier.

The word 'injection' is incorrect; it should be 'instructions'. 'One items' is incorrect; it should be 'an item'. The sentence lacks proper subjects and verbs ('help us' should be 'it helps us'). The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect; 'easier' alone is sufficient.

× Yes, of course goes reading in injection help us find more specific information about the machines and so have the avoid mistakes why we are using this machine.

✓ Yes, of course, reading instructions helps us find more specific information about the machines and helps avoid mistakes when we are using this machine.

The phrase 'goes reading in injection' is incorrect; it should be 'reading instructions'. 'Have the avoid mistakes why' is ungrammatical; it should be 'helps avoid mistakes when'. The sentence needs proper verb agreement and clearer structure.