Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni answer e kichu language error ache, jemon 'mission' er bodole 'machine' bola uchit, ar 'washing a machine' er bodole 'washing machine' bola dorkar. Sentence gulo aro natural korte, apni simple ebong clear sentence use korun. Apnar answer e kichu redundancy ache, tai kichu sentence chhoto rakhun ebong linking words use korun jate answer ta logical hoy.

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time after a busy day at work. When I come back home, I can easily wash my clothes using it, which makes my life more convenient and enjoyable.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu repetition ache, jemon 'save my time' bar bar bola hoyeche. Apni linking words use kore answer ke aro coherent korte paren. Vocabulary aro boro korte paren, ebong sentence structure aro natural korte paren.

例: I believe washing machines are more important than sweeping machines because they save a lot of time. Since I use the washing machine frequently, it helps me clean my clothes quickly and conveniently.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, jemon 'instructions are follow' er bodole 'instructions should be followed' bola uchit. Apni sentence gulo ke aro clear ebong natural korte paren. Linking words use korle answer ta aro bhalo hobe.

例: Definitely, I always read the instructions before using any machine because following them is very helpful. It makes using the machine easier and more convenient for me.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, jemon 'this help' er bodole 'this helps' bola uchit. Apni linking words use kore answer ke aro fluent korte paren. Vocabulary aro boro korte paren ebong sentence structure aro natural korte paren.

例: Yes, definitely. Reading instructions is very important because they provide essential information on how to operate machines safely and efficiently. This helps avoid mistakes and makes the process easier and more convenient for users.

× My favorite mission is washing a machine at my house because it is very convenient for me after hat trick schedules whenever I work on my uh, workplace.

✓ My favorite machine is the washing machine at my house because it is very convenient for me after hectic schedules whenever I work at my workplace.

The word 'mission' is incorrect; it should be 'machine' (singular). Also, 'washing a machine' is incorrect; it should be 'the washing machine' (singular). 'Hat trick schedules' is likely a mishearing or mispronunciation of 'hectic schedules'. 'Workplace' should be preceded by 'at' to indicate location. These corrections fix singular/plural and preposition usage.

× At that time I came back my home, it is easy, it is save my time and easily wash my clothes, so I can enjoy to use this machine.

✓ At that time, when I come back home, it is easy; it saves my time and easily washes my clothes, so I can enjoy using this machine.

The phrase 'came back my home' is incorrect; it should be 'come back home' or 'come back to my home'. 'It is save my time' should be 'it saves my time' (subject-verb agreement). 'Easily wash my clothes' should be 'easily washes my clothes' to agree with singular subject. 'Enjoy to use' should be 'enjoy using' (correct verb form).

× I think washing machine is quite important rather than sweeping machine because washing machine saves time a lot and sometimes I use washing machine very often and also it easily wash my clothes and save my time and it is very convenient for me.

✓ I think the washing machine is more important than the sweeping machine because the washing machine saves a lot of time. Sometimes I use the washing machine very often, and it also easily washes my clothes and saves my time. It is very convenient for me.

Missing definite articles 'the' before 'washing machine' and 'sweeping machine'. 'Rather than' is better replaced with 'more important than' for clarity. 'Saves time a lot' should be 'saves a lot of time'. 'It easily wash' should be 'it easily washes' (subject-verb agreement). 'Save my time' should be 'saves my time'. These corrections address singular/plural and article usage.

× Definitely yes. I read the instructions before using machine because instructions are follow.

✓ Definitely yes. I read the instructions before using a machine because instructions must be followed.

Missing article 'a' before 'machine'. 'Instructions are follow' is incorrect; it should be 'instructions must be followed' (passive voice with correct verb form). This fixes article and verb form issues.

× It's very helpful for me and I use. I usually use any kind of machine before I read their instruction and that time it is very easy and convenient for me.

✓ It's very helpful for me, and I use it. I usually read the instructions before using any kind of machine, and at that time, it is very easy and convenient for me.

The sentence 'I use' is incomplete; it should be 'I use it'. 'Before I read their instruction' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually read the instructions before using any kind of machine'. 'That time it is very easy' should be 'at that time, it is very easy'. These corrections improve sentence structure and clarity.

× Yes, definitely. I think it is quite important to read the instructions because it provides important information on how to operate it and safely and efficiently.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think it is quite important to read the instructions because they provide important information on how to operate the machine safely and efficiently.

'It provides' should be 'they provide' because 'instructions' is plural. 'How to operate it and safely and efficiently' is awkward; better to say 'how to operate the machine safely and efficiently'. This corrects pronoun agreement and improves clarity.

× Sometimes this help avoid mistakes and makes the process much easier and more convenient.

✓ Sometimes this helps avoid mistakes and makes the process much easier and more convenient.

'This help' should be 'this helps' to agree with singular subject. This fixes subject-verb agreement.

× So sometime it is a very important to people to read the instructions.

✓ So sometimes it is very important for people to read the instructions.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb). 'A very important' is incorrect; 'very important' is an adjective phrase and does not need 'a'. 'To people' should be 'for people' (correct preposition). These corrections fix plural and preposition usage.