Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 명확하게 구성하고, 불필요한 단어를 줄이며, 구체적인 이유를 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 하세요.

例: My favorite machine at home is the air conditioner because it provides cool and fresh air, especially during the hot summer months.

提案: 문법과 어휘 사용에 오류가 많고, 문장이 불완전합니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 명확한 이유와 구체적인 예를 들어 문장을 완성하세요.

例: Absolutely, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because without them, cleaning clothes and floors would be very difficult and time-consuming.

提案: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하며, 문장을 자연스럽게 만드세요.

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they explain how to operate it properly and how to fix it if it breaks down.

提案: 문장이 불완전하고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 명확한 주제문을 사용하고, 구체적인 이유와 예시를 들어 답변을 완성하세요.

例: Yes, reading the instructions is important because they provide detailed information about how the machine works and how to fix it if there is a problem.

× My favorite machine in my home is the. Air conditioner because the air conditioner offer the very cool air quality and in summertime it's very famous.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the air conditioner because the air conditioner offers very cool air quality and in summertime it's very popular.

There is an incorrect use of the definite article and punctuation error before 'Air conditioner'. Also, 'offer' should be 'offers' to agree with the singular subject 'air conditioner'. 'Very famous' is not appropriate; 'very popular' is better in this context.

× My favorite machine in my home is the. Air conditioner because the air conditioner offer the very cool air quality and in summertime it's very famous.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the air conditioner because the air conditioner offers very cool air quality and in summertime it's very popular.

The verb 'offer' does not agree with the singular subject 'air conditioner'. It should be 'offers' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Absolutely, the washing machine and the sleeping machine is very important in our modern life because if the both motion are not exist, we are trying to the washi wash our clothes are very difficult and.

✓ Absolutely, the washing machine and the sweeping machine are very important in our modern life because if both machines do not exist, washing our clothes would be very difficult.

The subject 'the washing machine and the sweeping machine' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'sleeping machine' is likely a typo for 'sweeping machine'. The phrase 'if the both motion are not exist' is incorrect; it should be 'if both machines do not exist'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× Absolutely, the washing machine and the sleeping machine is very important in our modern life because if the both motion are not exist, we are trying to the washi wash our clothes are very difficult and.

✓ Absolutely, the washing machine and the sweeping machine are very important in our modern life because if both machines do not exist, washing our clothes would be very difficult.

The phrase 'trying to the washi wash' is incorrect. It should be 'washing our clothes' without unnecessary prepositions. Also, 'are not exist' is incorrect; the correct form is 'do not exist'.

× Yes, I am away with the instructions. The instructions offered how to use the machine and after that motion is broken I will find the how to get fixed there. So I already read machine instructions.

✓ Yes, I am familiar with the instructions. The instructions explain how to use the machine and if it breaks, I will find out how to get it fixed. So I have already read the machine instructions.

'I am away with the instructions' is incorrect; 'I am familiar with the instructions' is correct. 'Offered' should be 'explain' to match present tense. 'After that motion is broken' is unclear; corrected to 'if it breaks'. 'I will find the how to get fixed there' is incorrect; corrected to 'I will find out how to get it fixed'. 'I already read' should be 'I have already read' for present perfect tense.

× Yes, the instructions have many information about the machine. So if we can read the instruction or manual, we don't find. We do not find how they activate mechanism or how can fix that? How?

✓ Yes, the instructions have a lot of information about the machine. So if we can read the instructions or manual, we will know how to activate the mechanism or how to fix it.

'Many information' is incorrect; 'a lot of information' or 'much information' is correct. 'We don't find' is incomplete and unclear; corrected to 'we will know'. 'How they activate mechanism' should be 'how to activate the mechanism'. 'How can fix that?' is incorrect; corrected to 'how to fix it'.