Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但表达略显重复和不够连贯。建议避免重复表达“machine”，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。同时，增加具体细节描述，如投影仪的使用场景或感受。

例: My favourite machine at home is a small film projector, which was a birthday gift from my father. It allows me to watch movies and videos on a big screen, creating a cinema-like experience in my living room.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。同时，提供更具体的理由或例子。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort, especially for busy parents. For instance, a washing machine can clean clothes quickly, allowing family members to focus on other tasks.

提案: 回答内容具体且相关，但句子结构稍显混乱。建议注意时态一致性和语法准确性，使用连接词增强句子流畅度。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using electrical machines that could be dangerous. For example, when I use my cutting machine for handcrafts, I carefully follow the safety guidelines to avoid accidents.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确。建议改进句子结构，使用正确的动词形式，并增加连接词使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I believe that reading the instructions carefully is important because it helps prevent potential risks and ensures the machine operates efficiently.

× It is a dedicated machine that can play films and other video you would like to see on big screen.

✓ It is a dedicated machine that can play films and other videos you would like to see on a big screen.

视频（video）在这里应使用复数形式，因为指的是多种视频内容。

× It is a gift from my father from my birthday.

✓ It is a gift from my father for my birthday.

“from my birthday”表达不正确，应该用“for my birthday”表示“作为生日礼物”。

× I believe cleaning appliances, for example, washing machine and sweeping machine, they can really ease the burden of a family, especially when both the parent have a busy job and they give they make the daily life more efficient.

✓ I believe cleaning appliances, for example, washing machines and sweeping machines, can really ease the burden of a family, especially when both parents have busy jobs and they make daily life more efficient.

“washing machine”和“sweeping machine”应使用复数形式，因为指的是这类设备的整体。父母（parents）也应为复数，且“have a busy job”应改为“have busy jobs”。

× I believe cleaning appliances, for example, washing machine and sweeping machine, they can really ease the burden of a family, especially when both the parent have a busy job and they give they make the daily life more efficient.

✓ I believe cleaning appliances, for example, washing machines and sweeping machines, can really ease the burden of a family, especially when both parents have busy jobs and they make daily life more efficient.

句中“they give they make”重复且多余，应删除“they give”。

× It is a gift from my father from my birthday.

✓ It is a gift from my father for my birthday.

“from my birthday”用法错误，正确表达是“for my birthday”，表示“作为生日礼物”。

× I always make sure I remembered the notes in the instruction before I start using it and always wearing safety measures.

✓ I always make sure I remember the notes in the instructions before I start using it and always wear safety measures.

“remembered”时态错误，应为一般现在时“remember”；“instruction”应为复数“instructions”；“always wearing”缺少主语和谓语，应改为“always wear”。

× I always make sure I remembered the notes in the instruction before I start using it and always wearing safety measures.

✓ I always make sure I remember the notes in the instructions before I start using it and always wear safety measures.

“remembered”是过去式，句意表达习惯动作，应使用一般现在时“remember”。

× I always make sure I remembered the notes in the instruction before I start using it and always wearing safety measures.

✓ I always make sure I remember the notes in the instructions before I start using it and always wear safety measures.

“in the instruction”应为“in the instructions”，因为说明书通常是复数形式。

× I believe cleaning appliances, for example, washing machine and sweeping machine, they can really ease the burden of a family, especially when both the parent have a busy job and they give they make the daily life more efficient.

✓ I believe cleaning appliances, for example, washing machines and sweeping machines, can really ease the burden of a family, especially when both parents have busy jobs and they make daily life more efficient.

句中“they give they make”重复且多余，应删除“they give”，保持句子通顺。

× Yes, I do believe that understanding the operation menu correctly will not only prevent the potential risks, but also making the machines operating more efficiently.

✓ Yes, I do believe that understanding the operation menu correctly will not only prevent potential risks, but also make the machines operate more efficiently.

“making”应改为动词原形“make”，与前面的“prevent”保持平行结构；“operating”应改为动词原形“operate”。