Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用有误，建议练习用完整句子表达观点，并且避免语法错误。可以先用简单句表达喜欢洗衣机的原因，再补充细节。

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me save time and effort when doing laundry.

提案: 回答内容简单且表达不清晰，建议使用连贯的句子并用连接词丰富答案，说明原因和具体好处。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and make daily life more convenient.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清楚。建议用简单明了的句子说明阅读说明书的原因，并注意语法和词汇的正确使用。

例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me use it correctly and avoid damage.

提案: 回答不连贯且有语法错误，建议先用简单句表达观点，再用具体例子说明阅读说明书的重要性。

例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because they teach you how to use the machine properly and avoid mistakes that could cause damage.

× I like in a gross wash machine because M. Lazy.

✓ I like a washing machine because I am lazy.

这里's 'gross wash machine' 是错误的复数形式和拼写，正确应为'singular'形式的'washing machine'。另外，句子中缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整。

× So I want to. Some machine to help me do some work.

✓ So I want a machine to help me do some work.

句子结构不完整，'want to.'后面缺少动词，应该改为完整的句子，表达想要一台机器帮助做事。

× Yes, becauses it can't. Help people save much time.

✓ Yes, because it can help people save a lot of time.

'becauses'拼写错误，应为'because'。句中'can't'与句意不符，应为肯定句'can'。此外，'much time'用于可数名词不合适，应改为'a lot of time'。

× And it's convenient in life.

✓ And it's convenient in daily life.

'in life'表达不准确，通常用'daily life'或'in daily life'更合适。

× Yes, it becauses no prize of motion are usually higher, so I will usually watch in the instruction before using a machine.

✓ Yes, because the price of promotion is usually high, so I usually read the instructions before using a machine.

'becauses'拼写错误，应为'because'。'no prize of motion'应为'the price of promotion'。'are'与单数主语不一致，应为'is'。'watch in the instruction'表达错误，应为'read the instructions'。

× It's important to protecting machine.

✓ It's important to protect the machine.

'to protecting'应为不定式'to protect'。缺少定冠词'the'。

× Yes, becauses the instruction are usually teach you how to use the machine.

✓ Yes, because the instructions usually teach you how to use the machine.

'becauses'拼写错误，应为'because'。'instruction'应为复数形式'instructions'。'are usually teach'语法错误，应为'usually teach'。

× If you don't look the instruction and maybe you will make in a machine to pair the and your shoe, the effort higher price to missed in the machine.

✓ If you don't read the instructions, you may damage the machine and your shoes, which will cost more to repair the machine.

'look the instruction'应为'read the instructions'。'make in a machine to pair the and your shoe'表达混乱，应为'damage the machine and your shoes'。'the effort higher price to missed in the machine'表达不清，应为'which will cost more to repair the machine'。