Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: My favourite machine at home is the TV because it brings my whole family together to watch shows and share memorable moments.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý kiến của bạn.

例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because people are often busy with work and these machines help save time by cleaning the house efficiently.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Actually, I don't often read the instructions before using a machine. Instead, I usually ask my parents who have experience because it is faster and easier.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using a machine because it helps us avoid mistakes and use the machine safely.

× TV watching TV is that I'm wearing my my whole family gathered an A shared experience in memory to.

✓ Watching TV is an activity where my whole family gathers and shares experiences, creating memories.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing due to incorrect word order and missing connectors. The correction rearranges the sentence to a clear and grammatically correct structure, using proper conjunctions and verb forms.

× You know, people these, they are busy to work.

✓ You know, these people are busy at work.

The phrase 'people these' is incorrect; the demonstrative pronoun 'these' should precede the noun 'people'. Also, 'busy to work' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'busy at work'.

× Busy at work so they don't have time to green their house and these may scene is really help.

✓ They are busy at work, so they don't have time to clean their house, and these machines really help.

The phrase 'green their house' is a misuse of preposition and word choice; it should be 'clean their house'. Also, 'these may scene is really help' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'these machines really help'.

× I actually I don't urea often read the instructions before using a machine.

✓ Actually, I don't often read the instructions before using a machine.

The phrase 'I don't urea often' is incorrect; 'urea' is a typo or misused word. The correct phrase is 'I don't often read'. Also, the sentence is corrected for clarity and fluency.

× I usually ask for my mother or my dad who has a first hand experience.

✓ I usually ask my mother or my dad, who have first-hand experience.

The phrase 'ask for my mother or my dad' is incorrect; it should be 'ask my mother or my dad'. Also, 'has' should be 'have' to agree with the plural subject 'my mother or my dad'. 'First hand' should be hyphenated as 'first-hand'.

× This am much more faster than.

✓ This is much faster.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. The correction completes the sentence with proper verb and adjective usage.

× Oh yes, of course greeting instructions before using a machine is of vital.

✓ Oh yes, of course reading instructions before using a machine is vital.

The word 'greeting' is incorrect; it should be 'reading'. Also, 'is of vital' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'is vital'.

× Do you know machine is at difficult an greeting make we.

✓ Do you know that machines can be difficult to use without reading instructions?

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction rephrases it into a clear and grammatically correct sentence.

× Don't repeat German.

✓ Don't repeat mistakes.

The phrase 'Don't repeat German' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. The correction assumes the intended meaning is 'Don't repeat mistakes'.