Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“it's really saves me”应为“it really saves me”，以及“thanks to eat”表达不清。建议注意语法准确性，避免冗余，且使表达更流畅自然。

例: My favourite machine at home is definitely the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and energy. Thanks to it, I don't have to wash clothes by hand, which is very tiring. I believe it is one of the most convenient and essential machines in daily life.

提案: 回答重复且语法错误较多，如“because because”，“it receives as a lot of time and energy”等表达不准确。建议简洁明了地表达观点，注意语法和逻辑连贯。

例: Yes, I believe both washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in our daily lives because they save a lot of time and energy. Before having these machines, we had to wash clothes and clean floors manually, which was very tiring.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“don't read them instructions”，“I have used them for many times”等。建议注意语法准确性，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

例: Well, it depends on the type of machine. For devices like laptops or cellphones, I usually don't read the instructions because I have used them many times. However, for more complicated machines, I prefer to read the instructions carefully to avoid mistakes.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“knew types, knew wishing machine”，“You'd better to read”等。建议使用正确的词汇和语法，表达更清晰。

例: Well, it depends on the type of machine. For example, when using complex machines like a new type of washing machine that you have never used before, it is better to read the instructions carefully to avoid mistakes or damage.

× Because it's really saves me a lot of time and energy.

✓ Because it really saves me a lot of time and energy.

这里的动词'saves'前不应该有助动词'is'，正确用法是主语+动词的第三人称单数形式。错误地使用了进行时态，导致语法错误。

× And thanks to eat I don't need to wash my clothes by my hand and which is really tiring

✓ And thanks to it, I don't need to wash my clothes by hand, which is really tiring.

短语'thanks to eat'应为'thanks to it'，表示感谢某物。'by my hand'应改为'by hand'，这是固定搭配。

× and I believe it is one of the most convenient and essential machine.

✓ and I believe it is one of the most convenient and essential machines.

'one of the'后面应接复数名词，'machine'应改为复数形式'machines'。

× Yes, I do believe both of them are really important for our daily lives.

✓ Yes, I do believe both of them are really important for our daily lives.

该句无语法错误，保持原句。

× And because because it receives as a lot of time and energy to do another important things before we had them and we had to wash my clothes and clean the floors and mentally, which works really tiring.

✓ And because it saves a lot of time and energy to do other important things. Before we had them, we had to wash my clothes and clean the floors manually, which was really tiring.

'receives as a lot of time'应为'saves a lot of time'，动词用错。'another important things'应为'other important things'，量词和形容词用错。'mentally'应为'manually'，词汇错误。句子结构混乱，需拆分。

× and we had to wash my clothes and clean the floors and mentally, which works really tiring.

✓ and we had to wash our clothes and clean the floors manually, which was really tiring.

主语是'we'，所以'my clothes'应改为'our clothes'，保持人称一致。

× For devices like laptops or cellphones I usually don't read them instructions because I have used them for many times

✓ For devices like laptops or cellphones, I usually don't read the instructions because I have used them many times.

'them instructions'应为'the instructions'，指代错误。'for many times'应为'many times'，介词使用错误。

× and however when for more complicated machines I prefer to read the read them avoid mistakes.

✓ However, for more complicated machines, I prefer to read the instructions to avoid mistakes.

'and however'重复连接词，应选用其中一个。'read the read them'重复，应简化。句子结构需调整。

× Well, it really depends on the types of machine.

✓ Well, it really depends on the types of machines.

'types of machine'应为复数'machines'，保持数的一致。

× For example when using some complex machines like knew types, knew wishing machine you had never used it before.

✓ For example, when using some complex machines like new types, new washing machines you have never used before.

'knew'应为形容词'new'，拼写错误。'wishing machine'应为'washing machine'，拼写错误。'had never used it before'时态和人称不符，应为'you have never used before'。

× You'd better to read the instructions carefully to avoid making mistakes or any damages.

✓ You'd better read the instructions carefully to avoid making mistakes or any damage.

'You'd better'后不加'to'，直接接动词原形。'damages'应为不可数名词'damage'。