Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议练习使用完整且连贯的句子，明确表达洗衣机的功能和带来的便利。

例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it is automatic. It saves me a lot of time and effort, allowing me to focus on other tasks while my clothes are being cleaned.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不完整。建议使用清晰的句子结构，避免语气词，具体说明这些机器的重要性。

例: Definitely, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time. This allows me to do other important tasks or relax.

提案: 回答含糊且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议练习表达原因时使用完整句子，并准确描述阅读说明书的重要性。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because modern machines have many functions. Reading the instructions helps me use the machine correctly and avoid damaging it.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，表达不清晰。建议练习使用正确的词汇和句型，明确说明阅读说明书的重要性。

例: I definitely think it is important to read the instructions because it helps you use the machine more efficiently. If you don't read them, you might accidentally damage the machine.

× My favorite machine is my wash machine which is for automatic and I can.

✓ My favorite machine is my washing machine which is automatic and I can use it.

这里“wash machine”应改为“washing machine”，因为表示机器的名称时通常用动名词形式。

× I don't need to worry about it and I can use the time it helped me to wash clothes this to do.

✓ I don't need to worry about it and I can use the time it saves me to wash clothes to do other things.

句子结构混乱，时态和表达不清晰，应调整为“it saves me time”并明确“to do other things”。

× Definitely, I think it so I can't imagine my life without them because it uh, uh, can help me to save time and I can use that time to do other tags or something.

✓ Definitely, I think so. I can't imagine my life without them because they can help me save time and I can use that time to do other tasks or something.

句子缺少连贯性，代词使用错误，应将“it”改为“they”指代复数机器，且“tags”应为“tasks”。

× And now that there are two more.

✓ And now there are two more.

句子中“that”多余，且表达不完整，应简化为“there are two more”。

× Yes, because uh, nowadays there's more shame. Buzz are how many functions?

✓ Yes, because nowadays there are more machines with many functions.

“there's”应为“there are”表示复数，“shame. Buzz”应为“machines”，且句子不通顺需调整。

× So if I don't read the instructions I made, don't know how to use it and probably 2 broken it.

✓ So if I don't read the instructions, I don't know how to use it and might probably break it.

句子结构混乱，“made”多余，数字“2”应为“to”，且“broken”应为动词原形“break”。

× I definitely think so, because the only thing you read the instructions that can help you to use the machine more inefficient.

✓ I definitely think so, because only by reading the instructions can you use the machine more efficiently.

“inefficient”用错，应为副词“efficiently”，且句子结构需调整。

× Tilly and if you don't read the instructions that probably you made broken brake pads.

✓ And if you don't read the instructions, you will probably break the machine.

句子不完整且用词错误，“Tilly”无意义，“made broken brake pads”表达错误，应简化为“break the machine”。