Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding unclear phrases like 'searchable capsule' and 'forwards or a spare waste of money'. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: My favourite machine at home is my coffee maker because it makes brewing coffee very easy and quick. I just insert a coffee capsule, and in a few minutes, I have a perfect cup without any mess or waste. That's why I really enjoy using it every day.

提案: Improve grammar and sentence structure to make your answer clearer. Avoid gender-specific statements and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Provide specific reasons why these machines are important.

例: Yes, I believe washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important in every household because they help complete heavy chores like washing clothes and cleaning floors efficiently. This makes it easier to maintain a clean and comfortable home.

提案: Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar. Instead of 'I don't look after the instruction box', say 'I don't usually read the instruction manual'. Also, explain your preference clearly and use linking words.

例: I usually don't read the instruction manual that comes with machines. Instead, I prefer watching YouTube reviews because I find it easier to understand how to use the machine by seeing it in action.

提案: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to organize your ideas. Avoid incomplete sentences and explain your opinion fully.

例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions sometimes because they help you understand how to operate the machine properly and avoid damaging it. However, I don't always read them if I am already familiar with the device.

× We just need to put a searchable capsule or what we want to drink and it will be all ready in minutes without any forwards or a spare waste of money.

✓ We just need to put a suitable capsule or what we want to drink and it will be all ready in minutes without any waste or spare expense.

The word 'searchable' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is likely 'suitable' or 'appropriate'. 'Searchable' is a present participle form but used incorrectly as an adjective. Also, 'forwards' and 'a spare waste of money' are incorrect phrases; 'waste' should be used without 'forwards' and 'a spare'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× That's why I just love it too much.

✓ That's why I just love it very much.

The phrase 'too much' implies an excessive amount, which may not be the intended meaning. 'Very much' is more appropriate to express strong liking without negative connotation. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers.

× Yes, I think that these two machines are the most important machines for every woman at every house because it's finish almost the heaviest work that we have, which is washing clothes and the sweeping the floors and.

✓ Yes, I think that these two machines are the most important machines for every woman in every house because they finish almost the heaviest work that we have, which is washing clothes and sweeping the floors.

The phrase 'it's finish' is incorrect; 'it's' (it is) should be 'they' to agree with plural 'machines'. Also, 'the sweeping the floors' is incorrect; 'the' before 'sweeping' is unnecessary. This is a subject-verb agreement and incorrect article use issue.

× It's mean a lot to keep the home clean.

✓ It means a lot to keep the home clean.

The subject 'It' requires the verb 'means' in third person singular form. 'It's mean' is incorrect sentence structure. Correct subject-verb agreement is necessary here.

× I'm not really. I don't look after the instruction box that comes with the machines.

✓ I'm not really. I don't look at the instruction box that comes with the machines.

The phrase 'look after' means to take care of, which is incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'look at' meaning to read or examine. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and pronouns.

× I just go on YouTube and search for a review and see it visually more than written book and follow the instructions.

✓ I just go on YouTube and search for a review and watch it visually more than reading a written book and follow the instructions.

The phrase 'see it visually' is awkward; 'watch it' is more appropriate for videos. Also, 'written book' should be 'reading a written book'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and verb forms.

× Yes, sometimes it's very important to read the instructions because you just to get an idea how to open the machine and how to deal with it instead of just do things and make the machine worst.

✓ Yes, sometimes it's very important to read the instructions because you just need to get an idea of how to open the machine and how to deal with it instead of just doing things and making the machine worse.

The modal verb 'need to' is missing after 'you just'. Also, 'make the machine worst' is incorrect; 'worse' is the correct comparative adjective. 'Instead of just do things' should be 'instead of just doing things'. This involves modal verb usage and verb form errors.