Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“favorites machine”应为“favorite machine”，“bridge fridge”应为“fridge”。建议注意单复数和词汇准确性，同时避免重复表达。

例: My favorite machine at home is the fridge because it keeps food fresh for a long time. For example, I can easily take fresh meat and vegetables from the fridge to cook dinner. It is very useful in daily life.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“sing”应为“think”，单复数不一致，且表达重复。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us time. As a result, we can do less housework and keep our homes clean more easily.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“raised”应为“read”，“fakest”不正确。建议加强词汇准确性，避免拼写错误，并简洁表达观点。

例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because they help me operate it correctly and fix problems if it breaks down.

提案: 回答中有语法和拼写错误，如“becaused”应为“because”，“include”应为“includes”，句子结构不够流畅。建议注意语法一致性和拼写准确，使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: Absolutely, I think reading instructions is important because they include essential information. They help us understand how to use machines correctly and avoid mistakes or damage. For example, reading instructions can save time and ensure safety.

× Well, I think my favorites machine in my home is the fridge because it can help me to keep the delicious food fresh for a long time.

✓ Well, I think my favorite machine in my home is the fridge because it can help me to keep the delicious food fresh for a long time.

favorites是复数形式，但这里指的是单数的“最喜欢的机器”，应使用单数形式favorite。

× When I'm hungry, I can take the fresh meats and vegetable out of the bridge fridge and cook for dinner.

✓ When I'm hungry, I can take the fresh meat and vegetables out of the fridge and cook for dinner.

meats通常指多种肉类的复数，但这里应指一般的肉类，使用不可数名词meat更合适；vegetable应使用复数形式vegetables表示多种蔬菜；bridge fridge是错误拼写，应为fridge。

× Sure, I sing the washing machines and a sweeping machines are very important in our daily life because the washing machines and sweeping machine can save our times.

✓ Sure, I think the washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in our daily life because the washing machines and sweeping machines can save our time.

sing应为think；washing machines和sweeping machines应保持复数一致；times应为time，表示时间不可数。

× We can do less housework because of them.

✓ We can do less housework because of them.

此句无语法错误，housework为不可数名词，less用法正确。

× And it can help us to keep our home clean.

✓ And they can help us to keep our home clean.

前文提到的是复数的washing machines和sweeping machines，代词应使用复数they而非单数it。

× Yes, I usually raised the instructions before using a machine.

✓ Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine.

raised是raise的过去式，意思是“举起”，此处应使用read（读）的现在时，且read的过去式和现在式拼写相同，发音不同。

× I think the instructions are extremely useful for us to use the machine correctly and it can help us to fakest when it is broken.

✓ I think the instructions are extremely useful for us to use the machine correctly and they can help us to fix it when it is broken.

fakest不是正确单词，应为fix（修理）；it指代instructions不合适，应使用they；且fix是动词，符合句意。

× Absolutely, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using any machine becaused it include essential information.

✓ Absolutely, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using any machine because it includes essential information.

becaused是错误拼写，应为because；include主语是it（指instructions），应使用第三人称单数形式includes。

× Please help us to understand how to operate the machine correctly and avoid mistake or damage.

✓ They help us to understand how to operate the machine correctly and avoid mistakes or damage.

句首缺少主语，应为instructions；mistake应使用复数mistakes，表示多种错误。

× For example, reading the instruction can save time and ensure the safety.

✓ For example, reading the instructions can save time and ensure safety.

instruction应使用复数instructions；the safety中the不必要，直接用safety更自然。