Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意时态一致性和句子结构，避免重复表达。可以使用更准确的词汇来描述机器的功能。

例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort by washing clothes automatically, which helps me relax.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议练习句子结构和发音，避免重复和语法错误。可以更清楚地表达观点并提供具体原因。

例: Yes, I think washing machines are very important because before we had one, washing clothes by hand was very difficult and time-consuming.

提案: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，建议注意句子完整性和词汇准确性。可以更自然地表达观点并使用连接词使句子流畅。

例: I think it is necessary to read the instructions because they help us understand how to use the machine properly and avoid mistakes.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议注意主谓一致和时态使用。可以更具体地说明说明书的重要性。

例: Absolutely, reading instructions is important because some devices are complicated, and the manual provides useful information on how to operate and even repair them if they break down.

× In my home, my favorite is machine maybe is the washing machine because it helped me to relax an I haven't to wash the clothes by hand.

✓ In my home, my favorite machine is maybe the washing machine because it helps me to relax and I don't have to wash the clothes by hand.

这里“machine”前缺少冠词“a”或“the”，且“helped”时态不对，应为一般现在时“helps”，因为这是一个习惯性动作。“haven't to”错误，正确表达是“don't have to”。

× It's a really convenience facilities in our home.

✓ It's a really convenient facility in our home.

“convenience”是名词，需用形容词“convenient”来修饰“facility”，且“facilities”应为单数“facility”，因为前面用了不定冠词“a”。

× Yes, actually yes, especially the washing machines, becauses before we both a washing machine in our home, the clothes, the clothes I need to wash it by my hand is really a. Difficult thing for Maine?

✓ Yes, actually yes, especially the washing machines, because before we bought a washing machine in our home, I needed to wash the clothes by hand, which was really a difficult thing for me.

“both”应为“bought”，表示购买；“by my hand”应为“by hand”，表示用手；“Maine”应为“me”；句子结构混乱，需调整使其通顺。

× I sing that must be necessary, and I will do it.

✓ I think that it must be necessary, and I will do it.

“sing”应为“think”，表达想法；“must be necessary”表达正确，表示必须做某事。

× 'Cause before we read the instructions we even don't know how to use the machine in the right way.

✓ Because before we read the instructions, we didn't even know how to use the machine in the right way.

句子缺少主谓一致，时态应为过去时“didn't know”，且“'Cause”应改为正式的“Because”。

× Absolutely yes, some facility have difficult method to use it.

✓ Absolutely yes, some facilities have difficult methods to use.

“facility”应为复数“facilities”，与动词“have”一致；“difficult method”应为复数“difficult methods”。

× The instructions provided some important information such as how to use it or even told us how to repair it if we broken it up.

✓ The instructions provide some important information such as how to use it or even tell us how to repair it if we break it.

时态应统一为一般现在时“provide”和“tell”；“broken”应为动词原形“break”；“broken it up”表达不正确，改为“break it”。