Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ liên kết để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine. It saves me a lot of time and effort by automatically cleaning clothes, which is very helpful during busy days. For example, instead of washing clothes by hand, I can just load them into the machine and start it.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện cách sử dụng từ vựng và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi phát âm và sử dụng các từ liên kết để câu trả lời có tính logic. Ngoài ra, nên cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để minh họa ý kiến của bạn.

例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in modern homes. They save a lot of time and effort compared to doing laundry or cleaning manually. For example, washing machines help keep clothes clean and hygienic, while sweeping machines make cleaning floors much easier.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và từ phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ liên kết để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine, especially if it is complicated. For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, I carefully followed the manual to make sure I used it correctly and avoided any mistakes.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời rõ ràng và dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi phát âm và sử dụng các từ liên kết để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, nên cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và chính xác hơn để minh họa ý kiến của bạn.

例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions carefully. Instructions provide useful information on how to use a product correctly, which helps prevent mistakes and accidents. For example, when assembling furniture or using electronic devices, following the instructions ensures everything is done properly.

× The washing machine is saves me a lot of time and effort by automatically learning the clothes, which is especially her phone during busy days.

✓ The washing machine saves me a lot of time and effort by automatically cleaning the clothes, which is especially helpful during busy days.

The phrase 'is saves' is incorrect because 'saves' is a simple present verb and does not need 'is'. Also, 'learning the clothes' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'cleaning'. 'Her phone' is a mishearing or typo; the correct phrase is 'helpful'. The sentence should use the simple present tense for habitual actions.

× For example, instead of hand washing in, I can simply loader machine in focus.

✓ For example, instead of hand washing, I can simply load the machine and focus.

The phrase 'hand washing in' is incorrect; it should be 'hand washing'. 'Loader machine in focus' is incorrect; it should be 'load the machine and focus'. Prepositions and word choice need correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I believe washing machines and swimming with his air very important in modern house home.

✓ Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in modern homes.

'Swimming with his air' is a mishearing or typo; the correct phrase is 'sweeping machines'. 'House home' is redundant; 'homes' is sufficient. The verb 'are' is needed for plural subjects. Adjectives and nouns must be used correctly to convey meaning.

× They save a significant amount of time and effort compared to doing laundry or cleaning manually for them or washing machine ensure glorious an clinic through to Leanne hashian nicoli while sweeping machine.

✓ They save a significant amount of time and effort compared to doing laundry or cleaning manually. Washing machines ensure clothes are clean and hygienic, while sweeping machines help keep the house tidy.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains many unclear phrases. It needs to be split into clear sentences with proper subject-verb agreement and correct vocabulary to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine, especially if it's something you are complicated.

✓ Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine, especially if it's something complicated.

The phrase 'you are complicated' is incorrect; it should be 'something complicated'. The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used here; the sentence should refer to the object 'something'.

× For example, when I pulled a new coffee maker, I carefully follow the manual to ensure I use it correctly and avoid in any language this house made, say Sam and River.

✓ For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, I carefully follow the manual to ensure I use it correctly and avoid any damage or mistakes.

'Pulled a new coffee maker' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'bought'. The phrase 'avoid in any language this house made, say Sam and River' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'avoid any damage or mistakes'. Prepositions and vocabulary need correction.

× Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions carefully. Injections provide sense of information on how to use a product accomplished attached correctly which has river mistakes and accidents.

✓ Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions carefully. Instructions provide a lot of information on how to use a product correctly, which helps prevent mistakes and accidents.

'Injections' is a mishearing or typo; the correct word is 'instructions'. The phrase 'accomplished attached correctly which has river mistakes and accidents' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'use a product correctly, which helps prevent mistakes and accidents'. Pronouns and vocabulary need correction.

× For example, when assembling furniture up using electronic device following the ingestion's ensure everything was properly.

✓ For example, when assembling furniture or using electronic devices, following the instructions ensures everything is done properly.

The phrase 'assembling furniture up using electronic device' is incorrect; it should be 'assembling furniture or using electronic devices'. 'Ingestion's' is a typo for 'instructions'. The verb agreement and prepositions need correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.