Machine— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
What is your favourite machine in your home?
受験者
My favorite machine at my home, of course, is my coffee making machine or my coffee maker. And I like this machine very much because it's making my life so easy. Whenever I just want to drink a coffee, I will put on a flavor or a capsule to it and in one minute my coffee is ready. So I just like it so much and it is my favorite one.
試験官
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
受験者
Yes, uh, I think this two machines are the most important machines that we can found it in each and every home becauses it make the life more easy, especially with the things related to clothes and cleaning the home. So I think this two machine is the Life and Times saver specially for mothers and hive.
試験官
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
受験者
To be honest, no I don't read the instruction each and every time because most of the machines I just buy it after I see reviews about it on YouTube. So I just have no idea how to use it and how to work with it so not that much. I am a person who read the instructions and books which come with the machines.
試験官
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
受験者
Yes, I think it is more important, even though if I don't read it, but I think it is important because some machines are very expensive and if you just do a little bit something wrong, it may just shut down. So we have to read so we can work on it correctly without any harm. So yes.
評価
総合
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
スコア: 75.0提案: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, use more precise vocabulary to describe your feelings and the machine's function.
例: My favourite machine at home is my coffee maker because it simplifies my morning routine. Whenever I want coffee, I just insert a capsule, and within a minute, it's ready. This convenience makes it indispensable to me.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
スコア: 65.0提案: Focus on grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use correct plural forms and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, try to explain your ideas with clearer linking words and more precise vocabulary.
例: Yes, I believe washing machines and vacuum cleaners are essential in every home because they make cleaning clothes and floors much easier. They save time and effort, especially for busy mothers.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
スコア: 60.0提案: Improve coherence by structuring your answer clearly and avoid contradictory statements. Use linking words to explain your habits logically and correct grammar mistakes.
例: To be honest, I don't always read the instructions because I usually watch YouTube reviews before buying machines. However, if the machine is complicated, I do read the manual to understand how to use it properly.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
スコア: 70.0提案: Make your answer more fluent by avoiding redundancy and using linking words to connect your ideas. Also, use more precise vocabulary to express the importance of reading instructions.
例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is important because expensive machines can be damaged if used incorrectly. Therefore, following the guidelines helps us operate them safely and effectively.
文法
× Yes, uh, I think this two machines are the most important machines that we can found it in each and every home becauses it make the life more easy, especially with the things related to clothes and cleaning the home.
✓ Yes, uh, I think these two machines are the most important machines that we can find in each and every home because they make life easier, especially with things related to clothes and cleaning the home.
The phrase 'this two machines' is incorrect because 'this' is singular and 'two machines' is plural; it should be 'these two machines' to match plural. 'Found it' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'find' in present tense. 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'It make' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; 'they make' is correct for plural subject. 'More easy' should be 'easier' as the comparative form of 'easy'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.
× So I think this two machine is the Life and Times saver specially for mothers and hive.
✓ So I think these two machines are lifesavers, especially for mothers and the household.
'This two machine' is incorrect; 'these two machines' is correct for plural. 'Is' should be 'are' to agree with plural subject. 'Life and Times saver' is awkward; 'lifesavers' is a common expression. 'Specially' should be 'especially'. 'Hive' is unclear; 'household' or 'home' is more appropriate. These changes correct number agreement and improve word choice.
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