Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“over”应为“oven”，“them microwave”应为“the microwave”，句子结构不够自然。建议注意单词拼写和语法，避免重复表达。

例: My favorite machine at home is definitely the microwave because it is very practical. Since I don't have an oven, I usually use the microwave to heat up food quickly, which is very convenient and saves me a lot of time.

提案: 回答中存在多处语法错误和表达不清，如“swiping machines”应为“sweeping machines”，“if without. Washing machines.”句子不完整。建议加强句子连贯性和语法准确性，避免断句错误。

例: Yes, of course washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help me save a lot of time and effort. Without washing machines, I would have to wash my clothes by hand, which is very tiring.

提案: 回答中有严重语法和拼写错误，如“Notary only”应为“Not really”，“good fair of knew gauges”不通顺。建议加强基础语法和词汇的准确使用，确保表达清晰。

例: Not really, because I am familiar with most machines and they are usually user-friendly. However, if a machine looks more complex, I always make sure to read the instructions.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误和表达不准确，如“photos safety part”应为“the safety part”，“cell rails accidents like fails”不明确。建议使用准确词汇表达观点，避免拼写错误。

例: Yes, the safety part is very important. Safety is my top concern. If you don't follow the instructions, it can be very dangerous and may even cause serious accidents like falls or explosions.

× Since I don't have an over, I usually use them microwave to heat up food quickly, is very convenient and saves me a lot of time.

✓ Since I don't have an oven, I usually use the microwave to heat up food quickly. It is very convenient and saves me a lot of time.

这里的“over”应为“oven”，是拼写错误；“them microwave”应为“the microwave”，因为“microwave”是单数名词，前面应使用定冠词“the”；句子缺少主语，需将“is very convenient”改为“It is very convenient”。

× Yes, of course washing machines and swiping machines are important because they help me save a lot of time and effort, and I'm not good at doing household chores if without. Washing machines.

✓ Yes, of course washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help me save a lot of time and effort, and I'm not good at doing household chores without washing machines.

“swiping machines”应为“sweeping machines”，是拼写错误；“if without. Washing machines.”句子结构不完整，应改为“without washing machines”以表达正确意思。

× I have where would have to washing my clothes by hand.

✓ I would have to wash my clothes by hand.

原句结构混乱，“I have where would have to washing”不符合英语语法，应简化为“I would have to wash my clothes by hand”，使用正确的动词形式和句子结构。

× Notary only because I'm a good fair of knew gauges and most.

✓ Not really, only because I'm afraid of new gauges and most machines are user friendly.

“Notary only”应为“Not really”；“I'm a good fair of knew gauges”应为“I'm afraid of new gauges”，拼写和用词错误；句子不完整，需补充后半句。

× Machines are user friendly. So I can easily know how to use them, but if machines looks more complex, I always make sure to read.

✓ Machines are user friendly, so I can easily know how to use them. But if machines look more complex, I always make sure to read the instructions.

“if machines looks”应为“if machines look”，主谓一致错误；句子连接不当，需用逗号或分句连接；补充“the instructions”使句子完整。

× Yes, photos safety part is important.

✓ Yes, the safety part is important.

“photos safety part”无意义，应为“the safety part”；“photos”可能是拼写错误或多余词，应删除。

× If you don't follow the instructions, it can be very dangerous and may even cause cell rails accidents like fails or explosions.

✓ If you don't follow the instructions, it can be very dangerous and may even cause serious accidents like falls or explosions.

“cell rails accidents like fails”拼写错误，应为“serious accidents like falls”；“fails”应为“falls”，且“cell rails”无意义，应改为“serious”。