Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，导致意思难以理解。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

例: My favourite machine at home is my computer because I use it for important tasks like developing software and designing platforms.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子说明理由。

例: I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are important, but I prefer the washing machine because I use it often on weekends to clean my clothes.

提案: 回答表达不够流畅，语法和用词有误。建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并说明原因。

例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine like the washing machine because it helps me understand how to operate it properly and maintain it.

提案: 回答中有很多语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明阅读说明书的重要性，并用正确的句子表达。

例: Yes, I think reading instructions is very important because they provide guidelines that help me use the machine correctly and safely.

× You my home, my favorite machines, my computer because the data hypermedia chair with the most significant tasks, so such such as developing software, designing the platform that is most important item in my home.

✓ In my home, my favorite machine is my computer because it handles the most significant tasks, such as developing software and designing platforms. It is the most important item in my home.

原句中“machines”应为单数“machine”，因为后文指的是“my computer”，单数形式。中文解释：这里谈论的是“我的电脑”，是单数，所以“machines”应改为“machine”。

× You my home, my favorite machines, my computer because the data hypermedia chair with the most significant tasks, so such such as developing software, designing the platform that is most important item in my home.

✓ In my home, my favorite machine is my computer because it handles the most significant tasks, such as developing software and designing platforms. It is the most important item in my home.

原句中“You my home”不符合语法，应改为“In my home”。中文解释：这里需要使用介词短语“In my home”表示“在我家”，而不是“you my home”。

× His depends from my perspective different people how are different all near on both machines.

✓ It depends on my perspective; different people have different opinions about both machines.

原句中“His depends”应为“It depends”，“different people how are different all near on both machines”结构混乱，应改为“different people have different opinions about both machines”。中文解释：主语应为“It”，表示“这取决于”，且句子结构需调整以表达不同人对两种机器的不同看法。

× His depends from my perspective different people how are different all near on both machines.

✓ It depends on my perspective; different people have different opinions about both machines.

原句中“depends from”应为“depends on”。中文解释：动词“depend”后应接介词“on”，表示“依赖于”。

× In my opinion. I prefer to washing machine because I often use that to Langtree at weekend, so that could be more important for me.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer the washing machine because I often use it to do laundry on weekends, so it is more important to me.

原句中“prefer to washing machine”应为“prefer the washing machine”，“use that to Langtree”应为“use it to do laundry”，“at weekend”应为“on weekends”。中文解释：动词“prefer”后直接接名词，“use”后应接代词“it”，且时间表达应为“on weekends”。

× In my opinion. I prefer to washing machine because I often use that to Langtree at weekend, so that could be more important for me.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer the washing machine because I often use it to do laundry on weekends, so it is more important to me.

“at weekend”应改为“on weekends”，表示“在周末”。中文解释：表示时间的介词应为“on”，且“weekends”应为复数形式。

× Yes, I often read the instructions before use the second week in the machine such as the washing machine.

✓ Yes, I often read the instructions before using the machine, such as the washing machine.

原句中“before use the second week in the machine”结构不正确，应为“before using the machine”。中文解释：“before”后应接动名词形式“using”，而不是动词原形“use”。

× Yes, I often read the instructions before use the second week in the machine such as the washing machine.

✓ Yes, I often read the instructions before using the machine, such as the washing machine.

“before”后应接动名词“using”，而不是动词原形“use”。中文解释：介词后面应接动名词形式。

× From my perspective instructions is is important.

✓ From my perspective, instructions are important.

“instructions”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。中文解释：主语为复数时，谓语动词也应为复数。

× That gave me a guideline to how to use the machine and hold to keep track of the machines record.

✓ They give me guidelines on how to use the machine and how to keep track of the machine's records.

“That”指代不明确，应改为“they”指代“instructions”；“a guideline”应为复数“guidelines”；“hold”应为“how”；“machines record”应为“machine's records”。中文解释：代词应与先行词一致，且表达应清晰准确。

× Yes, in my ocean unit and reading the instructions is very significant becauses that is sort of the guideline and help me to achieve the task to task cast and the date code tell me the whole to use the machine is very sick.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, reading the instructions is very important because they serve as guidelines and help me complete tasks. The instructions tell me how to use the machine properly.

“in my ocean unit”应为“in my opinion”；“becauses”应为“because”；“that is sort of the guideline”应为“they serve as guidelines”；“help me to achieve the task to task cast”表达不清，改为“help me complete tasks”；“the date code tell me the whole to use the machine is very sick”应为“the instructions tell me how to use the machine properly”。中文解释：多处拼写错误和表达不清，需改为正确表达。