Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly name the machine and explain why you like it using clear and complete sentences. Avoid fragmented sentences and ensure your response is natural and easy to understand.

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean my clothes quickly and saves a lot of time. I really appreciate how convenient it is, especially when I have many clothes to wash.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Please try to express your ideas clearly by using correct grammar and linking words. Explain why these machines are important with specific reasons.

例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important nowadays because they save a lot of time and effort. For example, washing machines clean clothes quickly, and sweeping machines help keep the house clean easily.

提案: Your answer is on the right track but needs clearer structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain the benefits of reading instructions more specifically.

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they help me save time and effort. Moreover, instructions show the correct way to use the machine, which prevents damage and ensures safety.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, reading instructions is very important because it helps me operate machines safely and efficiently. For instance, some machines require using a new breaker, and the instructions explain how to do this properly.

× Yeah, my favorite machine is this moving machine. Up because when I'm free. I stretching my sort. Dresses on this waving machine. I really loved it. And.

✓ Yeah, my favorite machine is this moving machine because when I'm free, I stretch my clothes on this washing machine. I really love it.

The original sentence has fragmented and incomplete sentences, making it difficult to understand. Combining the fragments into a coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I stretching my sort. Dresses on this waving machine.

✓ I stretch my clothes on this washing machine.

The verb 'stretching' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary verb. Also, 'sort' and 'waving' are incorrect words here; 'clothes' and 'washing' are appropriate. Correct verb form and word choice are necessary.

× Yes, now this time washing machine and this week machine are important in in our life becauses they had to consuming the time and the. Also save our beauties. Because, uh.

✓ Yes, nowadays washing machines and sweeping machines are important in our life because they save time and also save our energy.

Incorrect pronouns and word forms are used. 'This week machine' should be 'sweeping machine'. 'Had to consuming the time' is incorrect; it should be 'save time'. Also, 'beauties' is incorrect in this context; 'energy' or 'effort' is appropriate.

× Yes. It's important to read the instructions before using a machine becauses instead of these are instructions to make our a lot of time saves and efforts. And we will know how to use it.

✓ Yes. It's important to read the instructions before using a machine because these instructions help us save a lot of time and effort, and we will know how to use it.

The phrase 'instead of these are instructions' is incorrect; it should be 'because these instructions'. Also, 'a lot of time saves and efforts' is incorrect; it should be 'save a lot of time and effort'.

× Yes, it is very important to read the instructions because it helps me understand how to operate it as safely and efficiently. Sometimes instructions have a mentioned to use a new breaker by using it. It's so very important to when I use and.

✓ Yes, it is very important to read the instructions because they help me understand how to operate the machine safely and efficiently. Sometimes instructions mention using a new breaker. It's very important when I use it.

Incorrect pronoun usage and awkward phrasing are present. 'It helps me' should be 'they help me' referring to instructions. 'Have a mentioned' is incorrect; 'mention' is correct. The last sentence is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected for clarity.