Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，有些句子结构混乱，且存在冗余。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复表达。

例: My favorite machine at home is the vacuum cleaner because it helps me clean the house quickly. This allows me to have more free time to play basketball with my friends in the park.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子不连贯。建议使用连词连接句子，注意单复数和时态，表达更准确。

例: Definitely yes. Without a washing machine, I would have to wash clothes one by one by hand, which takes a long time. With a washing machine, I can finish the task much faster. Also, a sweeping machine helps me clean the house quickly and efficiently.

提案: 回答较为自然，但可以更简洁并使用更准确的表达。建议减少重复，使用更地道的表达方式。

例: Usually, I don't read the instructions because these machines are common and easy to use. I already know how to operate them.

提案: 回答中有较多语法和发音错误，表达不连贯。建议练习句子结构，使用连词使表达更流畅，并注意发音准确。

例: In my opinion, it is very important to read the instructions when using a machine you are not familiar with. This can help prevent accidents, like getting burned by a toaster if you don't know how to use it properly.

× I will certainly take the cleaning machine in my home as my favorite because it often helped me to do the housework so I can have free time to do other things.

✓ I will certainly take the cleaning machine in my home as my favorite because it often helps me to do the housework so I can have free time to do other things.

这里的动词时态应与现在时态的频率副词“often”搭配，表示经常发生的动作，因此应使用一般现在时“helps”，而不是过去式“helped”。

× For example, with my friends invite me to play basketball in the park, I can let the cleaning machine to help me clean my home.

✓ For example, when my friends invite me to play basketball in the park, I can let the cleaning machine help me clean my home.

原句结构混乱，缺少连词“when”引导时间状语从句，且“let”后面动词不加“to”，应为“help”。

× Definitely yes. We felt washing machine I need to wash my clothes 1 by 1 by hand.

✓ Definitely yes. Without a washing machine, I need to wash my clothes one by one by hand.

原句缺少主语和谓语的正确搭配，且“felt”用法错误，应改为“Without a washing machine”表示没有洗衣机的情况。

× And we will, we will be uh. Long time for me to finish it, but with the washing machine it will be quicker for me to do all the tasks.

✓ And it will take a long time for me to finish it, but with the washing machine it will be quicker for me to do all the tasks.

原句中“we will, we will be uh”不完整且语义不清，应改为“It will take a long time”表示需要花费时间。

× Also with the swiping machine I can rapidly clean my house an swept.

✓ Also with the sweeping machine I can rapidly clean my house and sweep.

“swiping”应为“sweeping”，且“an”应为“and”，动词“swept”应改为原形“sweep”与“can”搭配。

× Usually not, because the machine I bought is usually common in our daily life, so I know how to use them and they are easy to control.

✓ Usually not, because the machines I bought are usually common in our daily life, so I know how to use them and they are easy to control.

“machine”单数与后文“them”复数代词不一致，应改为复数“machines”，谓语动词也相应改为“are”。

× That's why I don't often read instructions before using them.

✓ That's why I don't often read the instructions before using them.

“instructions”前应加定冠词“the”，因为指特定的说明书。

× From my perspective. I would say daddy when using machine that you are not familiar with this vital to read the instructions because you don't want to get hurt when using the machine, for example when you are used a roll. Roaster.

✓ From my perspective, I would say that when using a machine that you are not familiar with, it is vital to read the instructions because you don't want to get hurt when using the machine, for example when you are using a roll roaster.

原句中“daddy”应为“that”，“machine”前缺冠词“a”，句子结构不完整，且“used”应为“using”，句子需要连贯和完整。