Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid minor pronunciation or word choice errors like 'closes' instead of 'clothes'. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid repeating words like 'much, much'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. For instance, instead of washing clothes by hand, I can load the machine and do other tasks, which makes my daily routine more efficient.

提案: Be careful with word choice and spelling, such as 'closes' instead of 'clothes' and 'throughly' instead of 'thoroughly'. Also, try to add linking words to improve coherence and avoid repeating similar ideas.

例: Yes, I think washing and sweeping machines are essential because they save time and effort. For example, washing machines clean clothes thoroughly and hygienically, which is very helpful for busy people.

提案: Focus on grammar accuracy, such as 'before I use a machine' and 'especially if it is something new or complicated'. Also, clarify your ideas and avoid unclear phrases like 'fold the manual'. Use linking words to connect your points.

例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine, especially if it is new or complicated. For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, I read the manual carefully to use it correctly and safely, which helps me avoid mistakes and makes the process smoother.

提案: Avoid repeating words unnecessarily, such as 'efficiently' three times. Also, correct spelling errors like 'avenge' which should be 'even' or 'more'. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

例: Yes, I think reading instructions carefully is very important because it helps avoid mistakes and ensures tasks are done correctly and efficiently. For example, when assembling furniture or using new technology, following instructions can save time and prevent frustration.

× Yes, I usually read the instructions before I using a machine, specially if it's something you or complicated.

✓ Yes, I usually read the instructions before I use a machine, especially if it's something new or complicated.

The verb 'using' is incorrect after 'before I'; it should be the base form 'use' because after 'before' we use the base verb form. Also, 'specially' should be 'especially' and 'you or complicated' seems to be a typo for 'new or complicated'.

× For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, I carefully fold the manual to ensure I used it correctly and safely.

✓ For example, when I bought a new coffee maker, I carefully folded the manual to ensure I used it correctly and safely.

The verb 'fold' should be in past tense 'folded' to match the past tense context set by 'bought'.

× This help me avoid mistakes and makes me process much smoother.

✓ This helps me avoid mistakes and makes my process much smoother.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'This'. Also, 'me process' should be 'my process' to correctly use the possessive pronoun.

× Yes, I believe it is very important to read instructions carefully. Doing so helps avoid mistakes and ensures that tasks are completed correctly and avenge efficient efficiently efficiently.

✓ Yes, I believe it is very important to read instructions carefully. Doing so helps avoid mistakes and ensures that tasks are completed correctly and efficiently.

The phrase 'avenge efficient efficiently efficiently' is incorrect and seems to be a typo or repetition. The correct adverb is 'efficiently' to describe how tasks are completed.