Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，且有重复和语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用完整句子说明原因。

例: My favourite machine at home is the CD player in my room because it allows me to enjoy music and relax after a long day.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用连贯的句子，明确表达洗衣机的重要性，并用具体细节支持观点。

例: Yes, I think washing machines are very important because they save us a lot of time and effort, allowing us to relax and focus on other activities during our free time.

提案: 回答不连贯且含糊，建议直接回答问题并说明理由，避免语法错误。

例: Actually, I usually don't read the instructions because I find it easy to figure out how to use most machines by myself or by searching online.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议用完整句子表达观点，并用条件句说明何时需要阅读说明书。

例: I think it depends on the machine. If it is simple, I don't need to read the instructions, but for complicated machines, reading the manual is necessary to use them properly.

× I think washing machine is ends with him more important because it can have A to do some housework and let us more relaxed than before.

✓ I think washing machines are more important because they can help us do some housework and let us be more relaxed than before.

这里“washing machine”应使用复数形式“washing machines”，因为后文指的是多台机器；动词“is ends with him”不正确，应改为“are”；“have A to do”应为“help us do”，表达帮助做家务的意思。

× An we we don't have to do any housework in free time that we can do a lot of a lot of things we want to do.

✓ And we don't have to do any housework in our free time, so we can do a lot of things we want to do.

“An”应为“And”；“a lot of a lot of things”重复，应简化为“a lot of things”；“in free time”应为“in our free time”，加上所有格。

× Actually, reader, because I think. It's not you not helpful for me, you know, because I think I'm a little bit smart about our Anne.

✓ Actually, I don't read them because I think they are not helpful for me, you know, because I think I'm a little bit smart about them.

“reader”应为“I don't read them”；“It's not you not helpful”语法错误，应为“they are not helpful”；“about our Anne”应为“about them”，指代说明书。

× I can search that an I can know how to use the machine.

✓ I can search for that and I can know how to use the machine.

“search that an”不正确，应为“search for that and”，表示“搜索那个”。

× Uh, actually I think is depend on was the machine around 4:00.

✓ Uh, actually I think it depends on what the machine is.

句子结构混乱，“is depend on was the machine around 4:00”不通顺，应改为“it depends on what the machine is”，表达“这取决于机器是什么”。

× If it is. BI think I don't have to read the instructions, but if the machine is very confused, maybe I I think we need to read it.

✓ If it is simple, I think I don't have to read the instructions, but if the machine is very complicated, maybe I think we need to read them.

“If it is. BI think”语法错误，应为“If it is simple”；“very confused”应为“very complicated”，形容机器复杂；“read it”应为“read them”，指代说明书。