Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand due to grammar and vocabulary errors. Try to give a direct and clear response by stating your favourite machine and explaining why you like it, using simple and correct sentences. Avoid unnecessary or confusing words.

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves a lot of time when cleaning clothes. It is very useful and helps my family a lot, especially my mother.

提案: Your answer shows some understanding but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to directly answer the question and support your opinion with clear reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Yes, both washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help keep the house clean. However, I think washing machines are more important since they save time and effort when cleaning clothes.

提案: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to clearly state whether you read instructions and explain why it is important, using simple and correct sentences.

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to use it properly and avoid damage.

提案: Your answer is unclear and difficult to follow. Try to directly answer the question and explain why reading instructions is important, using clear and simple language.

例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because it helps protect the machine from damage and ensures safe use.

× Where are my name? Is Union my own? But I'd like blood wash machine.

✓ What is my name? Is Union mine? But I'd like a washing machine.

The original sentences have incorrect sentence structures and unclear meaning. 'Where are my name?' should be 'What is my name?' to ask for identification. 'Is Union my own?' should be 'Is Union mine?' to indicate possession. 'Blood wash machine' is likely a mishearing or mistranslation; 'washing machine' fits the context better.

× Because it had to washing clothes is Lee it is conception of time.

✓ Because washing clothes takes time, it is a matter of time management.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and has unclear phrasing. 'Had to washing clothes is Lee it is conception of time' is grammatically incorrect and confusing. The correction clarifies the intended meaning that washing clothes requires time and relates to time management.

× It is most yours whole thing in other house better person my mother always.

✓ It is the most useful thing in our house; my mother always prefers it.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'Most yours whole thing in other house better person my mother always' lacks proper sentence structure and word order. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence conveying the intended meaning.

× Florida, take this machine.

✓ My mother always uses this machine.

'Florida' seems to be a misheard or incorrect word. The sentence likely intends to say that the mother uses the machine. The correction replaces the unclear word with a proper subject and verb to make the sentence meaningful.

× Yes, both are important, but washing machines are very important in our house and that they really retain every person used washing machine or washcloth with the consumption of time.

✓ Yes, both are important, but washing machines are very important in our house because everyone uses them, saving time when washing clothes.

The original sentence is confusing and has poor sentence structure. 'Retain every person used washing machine or washcloth with the consumption of time' is unclear. The correction clarifies that washing machines are important because everyone uses them and they save time.

× The G company was machine is very best for me.

✓ The G company's washing machine is the best for me.

The original sentence misuses adjectives and articles. 'Very best' should be 'the best' and 'was machine' is incorrect. The correction fixes these errors and clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I did. Instructions were using image machine because there's one person not read it, it'll just have snow machine.

✓ Yes, I did. I used the instructions when using the machine because if a person does not read them, the machine might get damaged.

The original sentence misuses past tense and has unclear phrasing. 'Instructions were using image machine' is incorrect. The correction uses proper past tense and clarifies the meaning.

× So it is a difficulty for those person.

✓ So it is difficult for those people.

'Person' should be plural 'people' to match 'those'. Also, 'a difficulty' is better expressed as 'difficult'. The correction fixes these pronoun and adjective errors.

× What is cause of damage of machine?

✓ What causes damage to the machine?

The original sentence lacks proper sentence structure and prepositions. The correction forms a proper question with correct verb and preposition usage.

× So firstly we read instruction before using any productive.

✓ So firstly, we read the instructions before using any product.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' and 'productive' is incorrect; it should be 'product'. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'instructions'. The correction addresses these errors.

× It is helpful for over.

✓ It is helpful overall.

'For over' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'overall'. The correction replaces the phrase with the correct adverb.

× So it is compulsory.

✓ So it is compulsory to do so.

The sentence is incomplete and would be clearer with an infinitive phrase explaining what is compulsory. The correction adds clarity.

× Yes, tire contact sheet instruction about because I'm mostly protected now to use without editor just ruction.

✓ Yes, I read the instruction sheet because I am mostly protected now and can use it without error.

The original sentence contains many unclear and incorrect words ('tire contact sheet instruction', 'editor just ruction'). The correction interprets the intended meaning and corrects pronouns and vocabulary.

× So firstly we need additional productive does some important things.

✓ So firstly, we need additional products that perform some important functions.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Productive does some important things' is incorrect. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence.

× So the projector using them any personal rejection it cause damage to the plug.

✓ So using the projector improperly can cause damage to the plug.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.