Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，句子结构不完整，表达不自然。建议练习使用完整句子，避免断句，增强表达的连贯性和逻辑性。

例: My favourite machine at home is my alarm clock because it helps me wake up early and ensures I am on time for work or study. Without it, I would find it difficult to manage my daily schedule.

提案: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，缺少连贯的连接词。建议加强语法练习，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I think washing machines are more important than sweeping machines because washing clothes takes a lot of time, while sweeping is not something you need to do every day.

提案: 回答含糊且语法错误严重，表达不完整。建议练习完整句子表达，避免重复和断句。

例: No, I usually don't read the instructions because I believe I can figure out how to use the machine by myself. However, if I encounter any problems, I try again and take more time to understand it.

提案: 表达不够完整，句子断断续续，缺少连贯性。建议练习使用完整句子，并用连接词连接观点。

例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions, especially when using machines that could be dangerous. This helps prevent accidents and ensures safe operation.

× Because it can make me get up early.

✓ Because it can make me get up early.

此句中没有动词+ing形式错误，保持原句。

× And. It can make me go work, go or go study on time without it.

✓ And it can make me go to work or go to study on time without it.

动词go后面需要加介词to，表示去某地。

× I don't know. I can't how to live.

✓ I don't know. I can't live without it.

情态动词can't后面应接动词原形，且句意应完整表达“没有它我不知道怎么生活”。

× I think works washing machine. Are important than sweeping machine.

✓ I think washing machines are more important than sweeping machines.

名词复数形式错误，且比较级结构不完整，应使用more important than。

× Because I think washing clothes. Takes many times.

✓ Because I think washing clothes takes a lot of time.

主语washing clothes是单数整体，谓语动词用单数takes，且many times用法不当，应为a lot of time。

× And sweeping. It's not every day you need to do and.

✓ And sweeping is not something you need to do every day.

句子结构不完整，需补充完整表达，且去掉多余的and。

× No, actually, no. I believe I'm a smart man and I can use it without using a machine instructor.

✓ No, actually, no. I believe I'm a smart man and I can use it without using a machine instruction manual.

machine instructor用词错误，应为machine instruction manual（说明书）。

× If I make run. Just need, try, try to need more time.

✓ If I make a mistake, I just need to try more times.

句子结构混乱，需调整为条件句完整表达。

× Yes, I think it is important to read instruction, especially when you using a machine that may hurt people.

✓ Yes, I think it is important to read instructions, especially when you are using a machine that may hurt people.

instruction应为复数instructions，you using缺少be动词are。

× There is. Very crucial things.

✓ There are very crucial things.

此句缺少主语和谓语，且things为复数，谓语应为are。

× And. It may be danger.

✓ And it may be dangerous.

danger是名词，形容词形式应为dangerous。