Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构不完整，且有语法错误。建议注意主谓一致，句子完整，并避免重复表达。可以适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time. After a busy day, I just load the clothes and start it, which helps me focus on other tasks.

提案: 回答内容不连贯，表达不清晰，存在大量语法和词汇错误。建议先理清思路，使用完整句子表达观点，并提供具体理由。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort. For example, washing machines help clean clothes quickly, and sweeping machines keep the house tidy.

提案: 回答中断且表达不完整，语法错误较多。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并适当使用连接词使内容连贯。

例: It depends on the machine. For common machines like the washing machine or dishwasher, I usually don't read the instructions because I use them every day and they are simple. However, for more complex machines, I do read the instructions carefully.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误严重，句子不完整。建议练习完整句子表达，注意时态和主谓一致，并提供具体理由支持观点。

例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using a new machine. This helps avoid mistakes and saves time in the long run.

× I think is really helpful and saves a lot of time in washing clothes.

✓ I think it is really helpful and saves a lot of time in washing clothes.

句子中缺少主语“it”，导致结构不完整。英语中“there be”结构或类似句子必须有明确主语。

× Is helps me focus.

✓ It helps me focus.

动词“helps”需要与第三人称单数主语一致，缺少主语“it”导致主谓不一致。

× Without ordering washing clothes and was more. Is. It can protect over, hence from. Washing clothes.

✓ Without ordering washing clothes and more, it can protect over, hence from washing clothes.

句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性和完整的表达，建议重组句子使其通顺。

× It depends on. The machine I am using for example are usually don't read out the instructions for common.

✓ It depends on the machine I am using. For example, I usually don't read the instructions for common machines.

介词“on”后应直接跟宾语，且句子断裂导致表达不清，应调整句子结构。

× The machine I am using for example are usually don't read out the instructions for common.

✓ The machines I am using, for example, usually don't require reading the instructions.

主语“machines”复数时，谓语动词应与之保持一致，且句子中“are usually don't”结构错误。

× And it is very simple to me.

✓ It is very simple to me.

句首不宜用“and”连接，尤其在口语中，避免句子冗余。

× Yeah, I think he's very important to read the instructions before use the new machine.

✓ Yeah, I think it's very important to read the instructions before using the new machine.

“he's”应为“it's”，指代“reading instructions”，且“before use”应改为“before using”。

× It can makes you avoid. Making mistakes and saves and save a lot of time.

✓ It can help you avoid making mistakes and save a lot of time.

“can”后应接动词原形，“avoid”后接动名词“making”，且动词形式需统一。