Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议加强语法基础，避免重复表达，并用更连贯的句子表达观点。

例: My favourite machine at home is the TV because children in China are not allowed to watch TV during weekdays. Therefore, I usually watch TV on weekends when I have free time to relax.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误（如'swimming machine'应为'sweeping machine'），语法和表达不清晰。建议注意词汇准确性，句子连贯性，并用具体例子支持观点。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because my mother uses them every day. They help us clean dirty clothes and floors efficiently, saving a lot of time and effort.

提案: 回答表达不清，语法错误较多，逻辑不够连贯。建议练习完整句子表达，注意时态和语法，清晰说明理由。

例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine. However, if I am familiar with it, I might skip reading because I can find information online quickly.

提案: 回答内容混乱，语法和词汇错误严重，难以理解。建议加强基础语法和表达训练，使用完整句子清晰表达观点。

例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because it helps you use the machine correctly and avoid damaging it or causing problems.

× Actually the TV is my favorite machine, my home, because you know, in China this child is can't to watch TV in the week.

✓ Actually the TV is my favorite machine in my home, because you know, in China children can't watch TV during the week.

这里的“this child is can't to watch TV in the week”存在单复数错误和语法错误。应使用复数形式“children”，并且“can't to watch”是不正确的表达，正确的是“can't watch”。此外，“in the week”应改为“during the week”更符合习惯用法。

× Actually the TV is my favorite machine, my home, because you know, in China this child is can't to watch TV in the week.

✓ Actually the TV is my favorite machine in my home, because you know, in China children can't watch TV during the week.

“can't to watch”中“to”是不必要的，情态动词后直接接动词原形，不能加“to”。

× Yes, I think the washing machine and the swimming machine is important because.

✓ Yes, I think the washing machine and the sweeping machine are important because.

“washing machine and the swimming machine”中“swimming machine”应为“sweeping machine”，且主语为两个机器，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× Uh, my mom. Used use them everyday.

✓ Uh, my mom uses them every day.

“Used use”是错误的过去式表达，应使用现在时“uses”表示习惯动作，且“everyday”应分开为“every day”。

× You know in our daily life we have a lot of clothes in dirty and floor have sore spot so we can use them to clean it.

✓ You know in our daily life we have a lot of dirty clothes and the floor has some spots, so we can use them to clean it.

“clothes in dirty”应改为“dirty clothes”，且“floor have sore spot”主谓不一致，应为“floor has some spots”。

× Yes, I also really instruction before use the machine.

✓ Yes, I also really read the instructions before using the machine.

缺少动词“read”，且“instruction”应为复数“instructions”，动词“use”应改为动名词“using”。

× Yes, I also really instruction before use the machine.

✓ Yes, I also really read the instructions before using the machine.

“before use”应改为“before using”，因为介词后应接动名词。

× But sometimes if I really know the machine I can.

✓ But sometimes if I really know the machine, I can.

句子不完整，缺少后续内容，建议补充完整句子。

× I will not read the instruction because I'm young man.

✓ I will not read the instructions because I'm a young man.

“instruction”应为复数“instructions”，且“young man”前应加不定冠词“a”。

× I got the information, the motion information in the website, so I didn't read it.

✓ I got the information, the motion information from the website, so I didn't read it.

“in the website”应改为“from the website”，表示信息来源。

× Yes, actually you only know how to use the machine but.

✓ Yes, actually you only know how to use the machine, but...

句子不完整，缺少后续内容，建议补充完整句子。

× You can't. Q. Pull miss, you will protect the machine.

✓ You can't misuse it; you will protect the machine.

“Q. Pull miss”是错误表达，应为“misuse it”，代词使用错误，需改正。

× Out of there something wrong, so it is important to read the instructions.

✓ Otherwise, if something goes wrong, so it is important to read the instructions.

“Out of there something wrong”表达不正确，应改为“if something goes wrong”或“otherwise”。