Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ слишком короткий и не полностью сформулирован. Следует избегать незавершённых предложений и добавить больше конкретных деталей, чтобы ответ был более естественным и информативным.

例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because our summers are extremely hot and humid. It helps me stay comfortable and productive during the day.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит много грамматических ошибок и незавершённых мыслей. Рекомендуется строить предложения логично, использовать связующие слова и конкретные примеры, чтобы сделать ответ понятным и связным.

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time. For example, busy mothers who work can use these machines to complete household chores more efficiently.

提案: Ответ содержит ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Следует использовать правильную грамматику и более чётко выражать мысли, чтобы ответ был естественным и понятным.

例: Of course, I always read the instructions before using a machine. It is better to understand how to operate it properly and avoid mistakes the first time.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется строить предложения более связно и использовать подходящую лексику для ясного объяснения своей точки зрения.

例: Yes, I believe reading the instructions is essential because it helps you understand how the machine works and prevents possible mistakes during use.

× My favorite machine in my home is definitely air condition.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is definitely the air conditioner.

The phrase 'air condition' is incorrect; the correct singular noun is 'air conditioner'. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'air conditioner' to specify the machine.

× In our region, summer is so hot and humid, so I like to.

✓ In our region, summer is so hot and humid, so I like it.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'I like to' which is incomplete. It should be 'I like it' to express preference. The verb 'like' here requires an object, not an infinitive.

× Assume that this kind of machines are very helpful for people because they.

✓ I assume that these kinds of machines are very helpful for people because they are.

'This kind of machines' is incorrect; it should be 'these kinds of machines' to match plural 'machines'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs a verb after 'they'.

× Our assist and help.

✓ They assist and help us.

The sentence lacks a subject and proper verb form. 'Our' is a possessive pronoun and cannot be used as a subject. The correct subject is 'They', and the verb should be in present tense.

× Are people save time, for example, for busy moms who works and.

✓ They help people save time, for example, busy moms who work.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'Are people save time' is ungrammatical. It should be 'They help people save time'. Also, 'who works' should be 'who work' to agree with plural 'moms'.

× Uhm. Who has? I want to work at.

✓ Uhm, who has to work a lot.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. It seems to refer to people who have to work. The corrected sentence completes the thought.

× Of course I read this instructions because.

✓ Of course I read these instructions because.

'This instructions' is incorrect because 'instructions' is plural; the correct demonstrative pronoun is 'these'.

× It's a beater to read before an not to hesitate when you try to use it at your first time.

✓ It's better to read before and not hesitate when you try to use it for the first time.

The sentence contains multiple errors: 'beater' should be 'better'; 'an not' should be 'and not'; 'at your first time' should be 'for the first time'. The corrected sentence is grammatically correct and clear.

× Regions that are written instructions.

✓ Reading the written instructions

'Regions' is a mishearing or typo for 'Reading'. Also, 'that are written instructions' is awkward; 'the written instructions' is correct.

× Is essential.

✓ is essential.

The sentence fragment lacks a subject. It should be connected to the previous phrase: 'Reading the written instructions is essential.'

× Because. It helps you to understand how this machine is work and as well understand the conditions where maybe mistakes.

✓ Because it helps you understand how this machine works and also understand the conditions where mistakes may occur.

'is work' is incorrect; it should be 'works' to agree with singular 'machine'. Also, 'as well understand' should be 'also understand'. The phrase 'where maybe mistakes' is unclear and corrected to 'where mistakes may occur'.