Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱，建议简化句子并使用更准确的表达方式，同时避免重复。

例: My favorite machine at home is the automatic coffee machine because it allows me to make coffee easily and saves me a lot of money.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯，建议使用完整句子并注意时态和词汇的准确性，同时使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, of course. Nowadays, people are very busy with work and have little time for housework. Therefore, washing machines and sweeping machines help us save a lot of time.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，句子断断续续，建议使用完整且连贯的句子，表达观点时更明确。

例: No, I usually don't read the instructions because machines are designed to be easy to use, and their functions are straightforward.

提案: 回答表达有些重复且语法不准确，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并更清晰地表达观点。

例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions. Although I usually don't, I read them when I find the machine's functions confusing.

× Nowadays people are busy about on the working and they have few times to do the.

✓ Nowadays people are busy working and they have little time to do the housework.

这里“busy about on the working”是不正确的表达，正确用法是“busy working”，表示忙于工作。此外，“few times”应改为“little time”，因为这里指的是时间的多少，应该用不可数名词。

× I think the washing machines and sweeping machines can help us to save a lot of time.

✓ I think washing machines and sweeping machines can help us save a lot of time.

这里“the washing machines and sweeping machines”不需要定冠词“the”，因为说的是一般的洗衣机和扫地机。去掉“the”更符合英语习惯。

× I think the machine is. Design easy to work now and the function of the machine is directly and you can know how to use them easily.

✓ I think the machine is designed to be easy to use now, and the function of the machine is straightforward so you can know how to use it easily.

“is. Design easy to work”语法错误，正确应为“is designed to be easy to use”。“function of the machine is directly”应改为“function is straightforward”，更符合表达习惯。

× the function of the machine is directly and you can know how to use them easily.

✓ the function of the machine is straightforward and you can know how to use it easily.

这里“them”指代单数“machine”，应使用单数代词“it”。

× Yes, I think so, although I never read the instructions. But sometimes I got confused about the machines function and some details maybe.

✓ Yes, I think so, although I never read the instructions, sometimes I get confused about the machine's function and some details maybe.

“although”后面不应再用“but”，两者都是转折连词，不能连用。应去掉“but”，并且“got”应改为一般现在时“get”，因为描述的是习惯性动作。

× sometimes I got confused about the machines function and some details maybe.

✓ sometimes I get confused about the machine's function and some details maybe.

“machines function”缺少所有格，应为“machine's function”，表示机器的功能。