Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地直接回答问题，并用正确的句子结构。

例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort.

提案: 回答中有多处语法和词汇错误，表达不连贯。建议使用连贯的句子，正确使用连接词，并具体说明原因。

例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort compared to doing chores by hand. They help keep the house clean and allow people to spend more time with their families.

提案: 回答基本清楚，但有词汇错误（introduction应为instructions），句子结构可更自然。建议注意词汇准确性和句子流畅性。

例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine to make sure I use it correctly and avoid damaging it. It also helps me know what to do if something goes wrong.

提案: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，表达不够自然。建议用更准确的词汇和完整句子表达观点。

例: Yes, I think reading instructions is important because they help you understand how to use a machine properly. This can prevent mistakes and save time in the long run.

× My favorite machine says who is the washing machine and saves me a lot of time and effort.

✓ My favorite machine is the washing machine and it saves me a lot of time and effort.

原句中'says who'用法错误，主语是单数，谓语应为单数形式，且表达不清晰，应改为'is'，并加上代词'it'使句子完整。

× Ah yes I see worship of time and effort compared it to do it by hand.

✓ Ah yes, I see the saving of time and effort compared to doing it by hand.

原句中'worship'用词错误，应为'saving'；'compared it to do it'结构不正确，应为'compared to doing it'，动词需用动名词形式。

× They help you keep sees clear.

✓ They help you keep places clean.

原句中'sees'拼写错误，应为'places'；'clear'用词不当，描述清洁应使用'clean'。

× The let people do other seats or spend time with family.

✓ They let people do other things or spend time with family.

原句中'the'应为'they'；'seats'用词错误，应为'things'，表示其他事情。

× Yes, I usually read the introduction before using a machine.

✓ Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine.

原句中'introduction'用词错误，应为'instructions'，表示使用说明。

× I want to make sure that I am using it the right way and not breaking.

✓ I want to make sure that I am using it the right way and not breaking it.

原句中缺少宾语'it'，导致句子不完整。

× It is also good to know what to do if something goes worry.

✓ It is also good to know what to do if something goes wrong.

原句中'worry'用词错误，应为'wrong'，表示出现问题。

× Oh yes, I think I'm reading introduction.

✓ Oh yes, I think reading instructions is important.

原句中表达不完整且用词错误，应改为完整句子并用'instructions'替代'introduction'。

× It is important because they helped you understand how to use something.

✓ It is important because they help you understand how to use something.

时态错误，说明现在的普遍事实，应使用一般现在时'help'。

× It's OK, stop you're from making mistakes and save your time in the end.

✓ It helps stop you from making mistakes and saves your time in the end.

原句中'you're'错误，应为'you'；句子缺少主语，需加上'It helps'，并注意动词时态和主谓一致。